Dịch - Turkish-English - Her yerde dolaşıp seni aradım.fakat bulamadımCurrent status Dịch
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Nhóm chuyên mục Daily life | Her yerde dolaşıp seni aradım.fakat bulamadım | | Source language: Turkish
Her yerde dolaşıp seni aradım.fakat bulamadım |
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I have walked around and looked for you everywhere, but I couldn't find you. | Remarks about the translation | |
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Validated by Lein - 10 Tháng 12 2010 18:04
Bài gửi sau cùng | | | | | 8 Tháng 12 2010 14:18 | |  LeinTổng số bài gửi: 3389 | Hi Bilge Ertan
In what way can this translation be improved?
Thank you! | | | 8 Tháng 12 2010 17:18 | | | It can be improved in many ways, do you mean in a poetic way or something? | | | 8 Tháng 12 2010 17:23 | |  LeinTổng số bài gửi: 3389 | No, don't worry, as far as I am concerned, the text looks fine
Bilge Ertan has replied (in the poll) that she thinks the translation is almost perfect but can be improved so I would like to hear her suggestion  | | | 8 Tháng 12 2010 20:48 | | | Oh, okay. I thought the message was for me  | | | 9 Tháng 12 2010 16:05 | | | Hi and sorry for being late
I replied in the poll like this, because I think the act of looking for sb is finished. Maybe we could say " I (have) looked for you everywhere, but I couldn't find you." It's just a little difference and not so important.
In addition, we don't see the word " dolaÅŸmak" in the translation. Here is my suggestion :
" I have walked around and looked for you everywhere, but I couldn't find you. "
Thanks for asking for my opinion.
See you.  | | | 10 Tháng 12 2010 15:43 | |  LeinTổng số bài gửi: 3389 | Hello again yeneruver
Bilge Ertan has suggested some small changes. Do you agree? Let me know and I can edit, if necessary, and accept the translation  | | | 10 Tháng 12 2010 17:54 | | | | | | 10 Tháng 12 2010 18:05 | |  LeinTổng số bài gửi: 3389 | Thanks! Nice working with you  |
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