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Заглавие	Unfinished sad postcard
Текст Предоставено от leonardohadad	Език, от който се превежда: Английски An Unfinished Sad Postcard Keep it close to your heart until we meet, until I finish my work, until there's no barrier between us.
Забележки за превода	I fell in love with a girl. but the distance make impossible our love, and we decided to stop talking until we can see each other as friends. I had begun to draw her a painting, but I can't continue, and I want to send her what I've done so far, with these words.

Заглавие	TamamlanmamÄ±ÅŸ HÃ¼zÃ¼nlÃ¼ bir Kartpostal
Превод Турски Преведено от merdogan	Желан език: Турски TamamlanmamÄ±ÅŸ HÃ¼zÃ¼nlÃ¼ bir Kartpostal Biz kavuÅŸana, eserimi bitirene ve aramÄ±zda hiÃ§bir engel kalmayana kadar, bunu* kalbine yakÄ±n tut.
Забележки за превода	*bunu= 'kartpostalÄ± kalbine yakÄ±n tut' anlaminda. Note: leonardohadad, in case of confusing, here you can find the literal translation: "Biz kavuÅŸana kadar, ben eserimi bitirene kadar ve aramÄ±zda hiÃ§bir engel kalmayana kadar, bunu (kartpostalÄ±) kalbine yakÄ±n tut."

За последен път се одобри от FIGEN KIRCI - 14 Май 2012 22:14

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	Автор	Мнение
		13 Май 2012 11:38
	leonardohadad Общо мнения: 8	thank you, but I've said "keep it close to your heart, not "keep your heart closed" it should be kalbinin yakInda tut? and I mean "artistic work" I don't know, you know better, "is," is means that or only "job/work"
		13 Май 2012 12:18
	Mesud2991 Общо мнения: 1331	"BaÄŸrÄ±na basmak" bence en uygunu. Bunu baÄŸrÄ±na bas ta ki karÅŸÄ±laÅŸana, iÅŸlerimi halledene, aramÄ±zda hiÃ§bir engel kalmayana kadar.
		13 Май 2012 12:55
	Francky5591 Общо мнения: 12396	Hi Laura! Please could you help here? Thanks! CC: kafetzou
		13 Май 2012 15:21
	FIGEN KIRCI Общо мнения: 2543	hi merdogan, -'Keep it close to your heart' means 'kalbine yakin tut' ('keep close' bir kaliptir ve 'yakin durmak' demek). - by saying 'until I finish my work' the requester means 'eserimi tamamlayana kadar'-> pls see the requester's comment under the source text. - for 'postcard' would be better to use 'kartpostal' . -'engel olmayana kadar'-> 'engel kalmayana kadar'
		13 Май 2012 17:58
	kafetzou Общо мнения: 7963	I don't think I'm needed here, Franck. Although it was not clear what the requester meant by "work" in the original request, he has since made it clear, as he apparently knows some Turkish, and Figen KÄ±rcÄ± is helping with the rest of it. CC: Francky5591
		13 Май 2012 18:35
	Francky5591 Общо мнения: 12396	Sorry Laura, I could have thought about sending Figen a Cc, that's right. Have a nice Sunday!
		13 Май 2012 22:05
	FIGEN KIRCI Общо мнения: 2543	it's ok, dear Francky. I'm taking care of this one and will try to evaluate it asap.
		13 Май 2012 22:26
	FIGEN KIRCI Общо мнения: 2543	merhaba merdogan, ceviri icin onerim soyle: "TamamlanmamÄ±ÅŸ HÃ¼zÃ¼nlÃ¼ Kartpostal, Biz kavuÅŸana kadar, ben eserimi bitirene kadar ve aramÄ±zda engel kalmayana kadar, onu kalbine yakÄ±n tut." (zamirleri ve tekrarlari ozellikle kullandim.) ceviriyi degerlendirmeden once gorusunuzu almak istiyorum.
		14 Май 2012 15:29
	merdogan Общо мнения: 3769	Merhaba Figen HanÄ±m, Ufak bir deÄŸiÅŸtirme ile Ã§eviriyi yeniledim. TeÅŸekkÃ¼rler.
		14 Май 2012 22:21
	FIGEN KIRCI Общо мнения: 2543	leonardohadad, evaluation of the translation you've requested done! please see the notes attached in the explanation space.
		14 Май 2012 23:05
	merdogan Общо мнения: 3769	Bence "bunu" yerine "onu" olmalÄ±.
		14 Май 2012 23:53
	FIGEN KIRCI Общо мнения: 2543	'it'=>'o/onu' ben de once 'onu' yazmistim, ama uymadi, cunku soyle bir durum var: leonardo sevdigi kiza cizdigi tabloyu bu sozlerle gondermek istiyor. dolayisiyla her nekadar 'it'=>'o/onu' demek olsa da, elde somut bir nesne var ve verilen mesajla ifade 'bunu/ bu kartpostal'a donusuyor. yani kiz tabloyu eline alacak ve su sozleri okuyacak '....-a kadar bunu kalbine yakin tut.'
		15 Май 2012 03:23
	leonardohadad Общо мнения: 8	hepinize Ã§ok teÅŸekkÃ¼r ederim. my level at turkish isn't good enough yet and I couldn't have done it without you all thank you very much!
		16 Май 2012 23:15
	FIGEN KIRCI Общо мнения: 2543	you're welcome, leonardohadad!