Original text - Danish - Jeg dvæler ved kunst og lyrik, mit sind undres og...

I dwell on art and poetry,
my mind wonder and my soul prosper.

Is that English version good enough?

CC: Bamsa

Yes that't the meaning of the Danish text

Thanks. drkpp can you have a look at the Hindi version I did? I'm a bit skeptical if I missed something.

CC: drkpp

Where have you posted Hindi translation?

खो जाता हूं has a meaning of getting lost as in "I get lost in art & poetry". If you want to capture the meaning of dwell, one should translate it as either मैं कला और कविता पर स्थापित हूं or मैं कला और कविता पर [जिंदा] रहता हूं

I was considering the second option you suggested. Btw even the exact literal translation कला और कविता में मैं बसति हूँ wouldn't be wrong.What do you think?

And have a look here tantine I saw you set a poll

CC: Tantine

Hi coldbreeze16

I'm not really sure what you want me to look at on the poll of the English version which has already been translated, evaluated and validated.

Can you let me know in case there is some problem with it.

Bises
Tantine

Actually the last time I saw the English one was not evaluated and showed up as tagged as being taken care of. So I thought Bamsa's comment here would lead to its approval