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标题	Jeg vil ikke lÃ¦ngere stÃ¥ pÃ¥ kajen og vente pÃ¥...
正文提交 Minny	源语言: 丹麦语 Jeg vil ikke lÃ¦ngere stÃ¥ pÃ¥ kajen og vente pÃ¥ livet. Jeg vil leve det.

标题	quay
翻译英语翻译 jairhaas	目的语言: 英语 I do not want to stand on the quay any longer and wait for life. I want to live it.

由Lein认可或编辑 - 2010年二月 5日 10:43

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	作者	帖子
		2010年二月 2日 14:42
	gamine 文章总计: 4611	"waiting for life" seems more fluent in English. But I'm not an English expert.
		2010年二月 2日 23:57
	Sweet Dreams 文章总计: 2202	I agree with Lene.
		2010年二月 3日 14:24
	jedi2000 文章总计: 110	I suggest to change the word "quay" (of a port/harbour) by "platform" (of a station).
		2010年二月 3日 16:48
	gamine 文章总计: 4611	It's written "quay".
		2010年二月 3日 17:19
	Minny 文章总计: 271	Meant is a quay (of a port)not a platform (of a station)
		2010年二月 4日 19:34
	Tg83 文章总计: 29	Some times the words have to be switched around to give more mening or "sound better" when spoken. More correct would be: i don't want to stand on the dock, and wait for life any longer. I want to live it.
		2010年二月 4日 19:41
	pias 文章总计: 8114	I'm not a Dane, but I think "vil" is a stronger word than "wish", so maybe replace it with "want".
		2010年二月 4日 23:09
	gamine 文章总计: 4611	Agree with Tg33. If one turns it this way:"I don't want to stand on the quay waiting for life any longer. I want to live it.", In my opinion it would sound more fluent in English. CC: jedi2000 Tg83
		2010年二月 5日 09:49
	jedi2000 文章总计: 110	"want" is stronger than "wish". In the context, I'd rather choose "want", because the will is more important.
		2010年二月 5日 11:43
	Lein 文章总计: 3389	Thanks all! I changed 'wish' into 'wait'. As for word order, especially since this is a more or less poetic formulation, I think your options are all correct but so is the original one. I think this is a matter of preference so let it as it was. Thanks again for your input!