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"waiting for life" seems more fluent in English. But I'm not an English expert.

I agree with Lene.

I suggest to change the word "quay" (of a port/harbour) by "platform" (of a station).

It's written "quay".

Meant is a quay (of a port)not a platform (of a station)

Some times the words have to be switched around to give more mening or "sound better" when spoken.
More correct would be: i don't want to stand on the dock, and wait for life any longer. I want to live it.

I'm not a Dane, but I think "vil" is a stronger word than "wish", so maybe replace it with "want".

Agree with Tg33. If one turns it this way:"I don't want to stand on the quay waiting for life any longer. I want to live it.", In my opinion it would sound more fluent in English.

CC: jedi2000 Tg83

"want" is stronger than "wish".
In the context, I'd rather choose "want", because the will is more important.

Thanks all!
I changed 'wish' into 'wait'.
As for word order, especially since this is a more or less poetic formulation, I think your options are all correct but so is the original one. I think this is a matter of preference so let it as it was.
Thanks again for your input!