Translation - English-Turkish - Unfinished sad postcard

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Category Sentence - Arts / Creation / Imagination

Title	Unfinished sad postcard
Text Submitted by leonardohadad	Source language: English An Unfinished Sad Postcard Keep it close to your heart until we meet, until I finish my work, until there's no barrier between us.
Remarks about the translation	I fell in love with a girl. but the distance make impossible our love, and we decided to stop talking until we can see each other as friends. I had begun to draw her a painting, but I can't continue, and I want to send her what I've done so far, with these words.

Title	TamamlanmamÄ±ÅŸ HÃ¼zÃ¼nlÃ¼ bir Kartpostal
Translation Turkish Translated by merdogan	Target language: Turkish TamamlanmamÄ±ÅŸ HÃ¼zÃ¼nlÃ¼ bir Kartpostal Biz kavuÅŸana, eserimi bitirene ve aramÄ±zda hiÃ§bir engel kalmayana kadar, bunu* kalbine yakÄ±n tut.
Remarks about the translation	*bunu= 'kartpostalÄ± kalbine yakÄ±n tut' anlaminda. Note: leonardohadad, in case of confusing, here you can find the literal translation: "Biz kavuÅŸana kadar, ben eserimi bitirene kadar ve aramÄ±zda hiÃ§bir engel kalmayana kadar, bunu (kartpostalÄ±) kalbine yakÄ±n tut."

Validated by FIGEN KIRCI - 14 May 2012 22:14

Last messages

	Author	Message
		13 May 2012 11:38
	leonardohadad Number of messages: 8	thank you, but I've said "keep it close to your heart, not "keep your heart closed" it should be kalbinin yakInda tut? and I mean "artistic work" I don't know, you know better, "is," is means that or only "job/work"
		13 May 2012 12:18
	Mesud2991 Number of messages: 1331	"BaÄŸrÄ±na basmak" bence en uygunu. Bunu baÄŸrÄ±na bas ta ki karÅŸÄ±laÅŸana, iÅŸlerimi halledene, aramÄ±zda hiÃ§bir engel kalmayana kadar.
		13 May 2012 12:55
	Francky5591 Number of messages: 12396	Hi Laura! Please could you help here? Thanks! CC: kafetzou
		13 May 2012 15:21
	FIGEN KIRCI Number of messages: 2543	hi merdogan, -'Keep it close to your heart' means 'kalbine yakin tut' ('keep close' bir kaliptir ve 'yakin durmak' demek). - by saying 'until I finish my work' the requester means 'eserimi tamamlayana kadar'-> pls see the requester's comment under the source text. - for 'postcard' would be better to use 'kartpostal' . -'engel olmayana kadar'-> 'engel kalmayana kadar'
		13 May 2012 17:58
	kafetzou Number of messages: 7963	I don't think I'm needed here, Franck. Although it was not clear what the requester meant by "work" in the original request, he has since made it clear, as he apparently knows some Turkish, and Figen KÄ±rcÄ± is helping with the rest of it. CC: Francky5591
		13 May 2012 18:35
	Francky5591 Number of messages: 12396	Sorry Laura, I could have thought about sending Figen a Cc, that's right. Have a nice Sunday!
		13 May 2012 22:05
	FIGEN KIRCI Number of messages: 2543	it's ok, dear Francky. I'm taking care of this one and will try to evaluate it asap.
		13 May 2012 22:26
	FIGEN KIRCI Number of messages: 2543	merhaba merdogan, ceviri icin onerim soyle: "TamamlanmamÄ±ÅŸ HÃ¼zÃ¼nlÃ¼ Kartpostal, Biz kavuÅŸana kadar, ben eserimi bitirene kadar ve aramÄ±zda engel kalmayana kadar, onu kalbine yakÄ±n tut." (zamirleri ve tekrarlari ozellikle kullandim.) ceviriyi degerlendirmeden once gorusunuzu almak istiyorum.
		14 May 2012 15:29
	merdogan Number of messages: 3769	Merhaba Figen HanÄ±m, Ufak bir deÄŸiÅŸtirme ile Ã§eviriyi yeniledim. TeÅŸekkÃ¼rler.
		14 May 2012 22:21
	FIGEN KIRCI Number of messages: 2543	leonardohadad, evaluation of the translation you've requested done! please see the notes attached in the explanation space.
		14 May 2012 23:05
	merdogan Number of messages: 3769	Bence "bunu" yerine "onu" olmalÄ±.
		14 May 2012 23:53
	FIGEN KIRCI Number of messages: 2543	'it'=>'o/onu' ben de once 'onu' yazmistim, ama uymadi, cunku soyle bir durum var: leonardo sevdigi kiza cizdigi tabloyu bu sozlerle gondermek istiyor. dolayisiyla her nekadar 'it'=>'o/onu' demek olsa da, elde somut bir nesne var ve verilen mesajla ifade 'bunu/ bu kartpostal'a donusuyor. yani kiz tabloyu eline alacak ve su sozleri okuyacak '....-a kadar bunu kalbine yakin tut.'
		15 May 2012 03:23
	leonardohadad Number of messages: 8	hepinize Ã§ok teÅŸekkÃ¼r ederim. my level at turkish isn't good enough yet and I couldn't have done it without you all thank you very much!
		16 May 2012 23:15
	FIGEN KIRCI Number of messages: 2543	you're welcome, leonardohadad!