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Traduko - Franca-Angla - Gloria tu manques dans l'air

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Titolo	Gloria tu manques dans l'air
Teksto Submetigx per Herpoelaert	Font-lingvo: Franca Tradukita per Sturel Gloria, dans l'air, tu me manques, tu manques Ã une main qui travaille lentement, tu manques Ã cette bouche qui ne touche plus Ã la nourriture, et toujours cette histoire, qu'elle, je l'appelle Gloria. Gloria sur tes flancs le matin naÃ®t le soleil, il entre de la haine et sort de l'amour du nom Gloria.

Titolo	Glory
Traduko Angla Tradukita per Tantine	Cel-lingvo: Angla Glory, you are absent in the air, The hand that slowly worked is spare, My lips, which yours no longer meet, All nourishment refuse to eat, And always, there is this story, In which I ever call you Glory The sun arises on your sides, Hate penetrates, then love presides, In the name of Glory
Rimarkoj pri la traduko	In order to rime well, I translated Gloria itself into English.

Laste validigita aŭ redaktita de kafetzou - 15 Junio 2007 08:08

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		14 Junio 2007 16:31
	kafetzou Nombro da afiŝoj: 7963	This is amazing, Tantine - I can't believe you made it rhyme! Can you think of an alternative phrase to "I now give a miss"? I'm not sure that would be understood. How about, "A mouth which yours no longer greets, thinks of you and no longer eats"? It's not great; can you work with it?
		14 Junio 2007 17:40
	Tantine Nombro da afiŝoj: 2747	Hi Kafetzou, I love translating poetry and getting it to rhyme! This turn of phrase didn't please me too much either, even though it rhymed well. Its a little too "precious" for the general tone. How about: My lips, which yours no longer meet, All nourrishment refuse to eat If not, your own suggestion is a good itself itself and would suit me fine. Bises Tantine
		15 Junio 2007 08:07
	kafetzou Nombro da afiŝoj: 7963	Oh yes - this is much better! I'll edit it and accept it.