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Gloria tu manques dans l'air
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Pateikta Herpoelaert
Originalo kalba: Prancūzų Išvertė Sturel

Gloria, dans l'air, tu me manques,
tu manques à une main qui travaille lentement,
tu manques à cette bouche qui ne touche plus à la nourriture,
et toujours cette histoire, qu'elle, je l'appelle Gloria.
Gloria sur tes flancs le matin naît le soleil,
il entre de la haine et sort de l'amour du nom Gloria.

Pavadinimas
Glory
Vertimas
Anglų

Išvertė Tantine
Kalba, į kurią verčiama: Anglų

Glory, you are absent in the air,
The hand that slowly worked is spare,
My lips, which yours no longer meet,
All nourishment refuse to eat,
And always, there is this story,
In which I ever call you Glory
The sun arises on your sides,
Hate penetrates, then love presides,
In the name of Glory
Pastabos apie vertimą
In order to rime well, I translated Gloria itself into English.
Validated by kafetzou - 15 birželis 2007 08:08





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14 birželis 2007 16:31

kafetzou
Žinučių kiekis: 7963
This is amazing, Tantine - I can't believe you made it rhyme!

Can you think of an alternative phrase to "I now give a miss"? I'm not sure that would be understood.

How about, "A mouth which yours no longer greets,
thinks of you and no longer eats"? It's not great; can you work with it?

14 birželis 2007 17:40

Tantine
Žinučių kiekis: 2747
Hi Kafetzou,

I love translating poetry and getting it to rhyme!

This turn of phrase didn't please me too much either, even though it rhymed well. Its a little too "precious" for the general tone.

How about:

My lips, which yours no longer meet,
All nourrishment refuse to eat

If not, your own suggestion is a good itself itself and would suit me fine.

Bises
Tantine

15 birželis 2007 08:07

kafetzou
Žinučių kiekis: 7963
Oh yes - this is much better! I'll edit it and accept it.