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Dịch - Hebrew-English - שלו×, הרשו לי לגזול כמה ×¨×’×¢×™× ×ž×–×ž× ×›× ×”×™×§×¨ ....Current status Dịch
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Nhóm chuyên mục Speech - Arts / Creation / Imagination | שלו×, הרשו לי לגזול כמה ×¨×’×¢×™× ×ž×–×ž× ×›× ×”×™×§×¨ .... | | Source language: Hebrew
שלו×, הרשו לי לגזול כמה ×¨×’×¢×™× ×ž×–×ž× ×›× ×”×™×§×¨ . ×¨×’×¢×™× ×‘×”× ×ספר ×œ×›× ×žÖ´×¡Ö°×¤Ö¼Ö·×¨ עובדות ×ותן למדתי במהלך ×”×©× ×™× ×”××—×¨×•× ×•×ª. ××™× × ×™ יודע מהו מקור ×”×ומץ שלי ×œ×¤× ×•×ª ××œ×™×›× ×•×ולי ×—×œ×§×›× ×™×–×œ×–×œ בי וברצון שלי לחלוק ××ª×›× ×ת ×”× ×™×¡×™×•×Ÿ שלי ולהחשיבו ×›×ž×¢× ×™×™×Ÿ. ×בל הלוו××™ של×, הלוו××™ שתוכלו לכמה ×¨×’×¢×™× ×œ×”×§×©×™×‘ לי ו×× ×™ ×וכל להקשיב לעצמי ×¤×•× ×” ×ליכ×. ×× ×›×Ÿ, זוהי בקשה להקשבה הדדית. תודה. | Remarks about the translation | פתיחה של × ××•× ×œ×¦×¨×›×™ הופעה, ×¡×§×¨× ×™×ª ×œ×ª×¨×’×•× ×©×œ מישהו ×חר |
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| Hello, allow me to take a few moments of your precious time... | | Target language: English
Hello, allow me to take a few moments of your precious time; moments in which I will tell you a few facts I've learned over the last years.
I'm not sure from where I draw the courage to address you, and perhaps some of you will disrespect me and my desire to share my experience and consider it fascinating.
But I hope not, I hope you could take a few moments and listen to me, and I will be able to listen to myself addressing you. So, this is a request for mutual attention.
Thank you | Remarks about the translation | it was hard, is the text originaly in hebrew?
instead of "source", i thought about inserting "origin".
הקשבה הדדית
i chose attention instead of listening. |
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27 Tháng 12 2008 21:59 | | | ×©×œ×•× ×•×ª×•×“×” רבה.
כן הטקסט המקורי בעברית- ×–×” טקסט ש×× ×™ כתבתי
לצורך יצירת ××ž× ×•×ª כלשהי ועכשיו ×× ×™ עובד על ×ª×¨×’×•× ×•×ž×¢× ×™×™×Ÿ ×ותי לשמוע עוד חוות דעת...
שוב תודה | | |
27 Tháng 12 2008 23:22 | | | בכיף!  | | |
7 Tháng 1 2009 20:39 | | | Hi fatsrir,
Could you please capitalize the pronoun 'I' so that we can start evaluating the rest? | | |
8 Tháng 1 2009 10:06 | | | Instead of 'disrespect', I think it would be better to write 'insult'.
Except that, I think it's fine. | | |
8 Tháng 1 2009 11:58 | | | insult doesn't fit here.
insult is to say something disrespectful.
disrespect is to think it.
insult להעליב
disrespect לזלזל | | |
9 Tháng 1 2009 14:19 | | | First of all, well done, fatsrir.
However (and there is always a however), several small things occur to me:
- First sentence - 'moments in which', not 'on which'
- For the beginning of the second sentence I would suggest, "I'm not sure from where I draw the courage to address you..."
- End of second sentence: "and to consider it fascinating", not 'considering it fascinating'.
I'm not sure about that bit with attention, but if Sharon is happy with it - it's just fine. |
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- 15 Tháng 1 2009 12:25