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Dịch - French-English - Gloria tu manques dans l'air

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Title	Gloria tu manques dans l'air
Text Submitted by Herpoelaert	Source language: French Translated by Sturel Gloria, dans l'air, tu me manques, tu manques Ã une main qui travaille lentement, tu manques Ã cette bouche qui ne touche plus Ã la nourriture, et toujours cette histoire, qu'elle, je l'appelle Gloria. Gloria sur tes flancs le matin naÃ®t le soleil, il entre de la haine et sort de l'amour du nom Gloria.

Title	Glory
Dịch English Translated by Tantine	Target language: English Glory, you are absent in the air, The hand that slowly worked is spare, My lips, which yours no longer meet, All nourishment refuse to eat, And always, there is this story, In which I ever call you Glory The sun arises on your sides, Hate penetrates, then love presides, In the name of Glory
Remarks about the translation	In order to rime well, I translated Gloria itself into English.

Validated by kafetzou - 15 Tháng 6 2007 08:08

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		14 Tháng 6 2007 16:31
	kafetzou Tổng số bài gửi: 7963	This is amazing, Tantine - I can't believe you made it rhyme! Can you think of an alternative phrase to "I now give a miss"? I'm not sure that would be understood. How about, "A mouth which yours no longer greets, thinks of you and no longer eats"? It's not great; can you work with it?
		14 Tháng 6 2007 17:40
	Tantine Tổng số bài gửi: 2747	Hi Kafetzou, I love translating poetry and getting it to rhyme! This turn of phrase didn't please me too much either, even though it rhymed well. Its a little too "precious" for the general tone. How about: My lips, which yours no longer meet, All nourrishment refuse to eat If not, your own suggestion is a good itself itself and would suit me fine. Bises Tantine
		15 Tháng 6 2007 08:07
	kafetzou Tổng số bài gửi: 7963	Oh yes - this is much better! I'll edit it and accept it.