Translation - Turks-Engels - O gün seni gördüm.Ve aşık olmuştum.Sürekli seni...

Hi Jemma,
The English is very good
I'd only change:
I collected my courage ---> I gathered up my courage

and I'd put a comma after "If you come,..."

What do you think?

Hi lilian canale,
Thanks for your kind message
to be honest that was the only part I doubted a lot about, couldn't find the proper translation for that. I definately agree with your correction. Sounds much better!

and the comma is a must at that place for sure, I forgot.
Keep up the good word lilian!

OK, then if you make those edits we can set a poll to help with the Turkish (mine is 0!)

deal!

I'm still waiting for the edits

I just edited the text :S
let me check it out again.