翻訳 - 英語 -ラテン語 - Brother, not a Lover

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カテゴリ詩歌 - 愛 / 友情

タイトル	Brother, not a Lover
テキスト redz21様が投稿しました	原稿の言語: 英語 You're really a beautiful soul my Brother, my Hell, my Beloved... How to tell you that I'm sorry, really sorry, Blame me, Hate me, but don't give the word 'love' on me... I'm not that worth.
翻訳についてのコメント	I want to give this 'note' to a person who's like a brother for me.

タイトル	Frater, non Amator
翻訳ラテン語 Aneta B.様が翻訳しました	翻訳の言語: ラテン語 Anima vere pulchra tu es Frater meus, Tartarus meus, Amatus... Quomodo tibi dicam me paenitere, vero paenitere, Me reprehendeas, odio me habeas, sed me amorem noli vocare... Usque adeo digna non sum.
翻訳についてのコメント	Amatus/Dilectus

最終承認・編集者 Aneta B. - 2011年 9月 6日 17:31

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	投稿者	投稿１
		2011年 8月 30日 09:38
	Francky5591 投稿数: 12396	Female gender with "dignus" ("digna", maybe (cf the remark left by the requester )
		2011年 8月 30日 11:12
	Francky5591 投稿数: 12396	Already posted above (As I was asked by the server to develop my argumentation after having clicked on "the translation is right but might be improved"
		2011年 8月 30日 11:56
	Aneta B. 投稿数: 4487	You are right, Francky! Thank you! I forgot the requester was female...
		2011年 8月 31日 10:59
	Francky5591 投稿数: 12396	Hi dear! Now that you did the edit, my vote at the poll is "green", and not "blue" anymore! Are you waiting for Efy's vote before validating?
		2011年 8月 31日 12:11
	emaltotinn 投稿数: 1	I think that "anima" is better than "animus"; "animus" is more like "spirit". Moreover, "my Brother etc." require the vocative: "mi frater, Tartare, dilecte" (and "dilectus" provides the text a nice "variatio" in reference to the verb "amare"
		2011年 8月 31日 15:10
	Aneta B. 投稿数: 4487	Dear Francky, Yes, I'm waiting for Efee's opinion as usual when it concerns longer and more complicated texts. --- Dear Efee, Could you help me with an evaluation here? It's really difficult to deal with my own translations without your help... --- Dear amaltoninn, Thank you for your input. Yes I agree that 'anima' would fit even better than 'animus' in this context. But, it's not so obvious that the words in a second line are in the Vocative. They can be also in the Nonimative, don't you think? I have connected them with the first line where we have "tu es" (you are). tu es --> anima pulchra tu es-->frater meus tu es--> Tartarus meus tu es--> amatus/dilectus meus Of course your interpretation is also possible. That's why I will ask the requester to clarify a meaning of the line. --- Dear edz21, Could you please tell us whether the words in a second line are in the Nominative and represent or describe the subject or they are in the Vocative case (=case of address), i.e. they "call" the subject. Thank you. My best regards Aneta B.
		2011年 8月 31日 15:06
	Aneta B. 投稿数: 4487	Ooops! Serena? CC: Efylove
		2011年 9月 2日 07:57
	Efylove 投稿数: 1015	Hi Aneta! Sorry for the delay, I'm being very busy, but I'll tell you everything later. Green light for your translation! Just a doubt abut "odio me habeas": why did you choose the subjunctive and not an imperative (as you did for "reprehende"? However, as amaltoninn suggested, I will wait for edz21's answer about the second line, because it seems quite ambiguous (I also though they were vocative!).
		2011年 9月 2日 09:33
	Aneta B. 投稿数: 4487	Ha! Yes, first I had imperatives in both the verbs then I decided to change into subjunctive, but I have done it only with the one... Have no idea why... Thank you! All right. Let's wait for the requester's explanations.
		2011年 9月 2日 23:41
	Aneta B. 投稿数: 4487	redz21? You logged in tonight, but didn't answer our question...
		2011年 9月 6日 17:29
	Aneta B. 投稿数: 4487	Since the requester has not replied (I understand he doesn't care anymore), I'm gonna accept the translation as it is. I'll make only the few changes that we agreed to. Thanks to all of you for your help!