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Merhaba Sirinler

By "gale" you mean lots of wind?

Maybe "storm" would be better or even "tempest"!!

I think it would read better too if you changed "of" to "in"

Bises
Tantine

it should be "the storm of my heart"

Oooo...Whom will I listen?? Both you and Tantine say different things, Smy....you decide..then I can change to the correct one..

"storm" and "tempest" are both good for this case sirinler,
you can choose whichever you like but I prefer "storm" and it should begin with a "the" and should take an "of" instead "in"

Ok..I have changed it....

and I've chnged my vote

Merhaba sirinler,

With the word "storm", which has replaced "gale", either seem possible in English.

I still prefer "in" to "of", but if "of" is closer to the Turkish version, then its ok to put "of".

Bises
Tantine

ps, how do you say "bises" in Turkish?