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You said it yourself: "This is a very, very clumsy and awkward text. It's an exercise to interpret it in its original language as well as translate it into another one". So I imagine you are very brave person!

But, let me improve it:

1."…quae aeternum in orbibus suis contorquent abductus considero
--> quae in aeternum (or:semper) in orbitis suis (or: in aeternis orbitis suis) contorquent abductus (or much better: fascinatus)considero,

2.etiam anima mea ad milliones kilometri ultra has longinquas stellas volat,
--> etiam anima mea in distantione millionum chilometrorum de his longinquis stellis evolat,


3. ad primam fontem quae omnia effectata est et omnia nascitura crebit.
-->ad primam fontem (or much better: originem) quae omnibus initium dedit et omnia nascitura creabit".

Hope it is clear. You can ask, of course...

Good. I simply don't know how to express some things in Latin yet.

At all, we've writter a text much better than the original one.

CC: Aneta B.

Hehe! I'm glad you are satisfied! It is only because of your perfect bridges for me!