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Hi again

Last one today before I log off

This looks like a poem or song, probably not so easy to translate but it lookst good!

Just two or three small things:

- no go, to me (in England) has the association of a 'no go area', where it is too dangerous or where you are not allowed to go. How is 'It is no good'? (that means something like 'I cannot do it')
- 'come beside me more' sounds a bit odd. More than you are doing now? How about 'Come beside me again'? Or maybe 'once more'? (also meaning, return to my side)
- I sleep by crying': I cry myself to sleep?

Thanks again!
Good night!

Hi yourself again

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- The literal translation of that part is 'come beside me more'. Yet, I agree with you. Change it whatever you want.

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Hi Bilge
Could you help me here? Is this ok? I am not getting many votes.
Thanks!

CC: Bilge Ertan

Hey Lein

I think the translation is OK except the first line. I would say " I can't stand anymore"

In French, it is exactly "J'en peux plus" but I can't find an alternative English translation. Francky, do you have any other suggestion to translate "Je n'en peux plus" into English? Thank you



CC: Francky5591

How about "it won't do anymore"?

Hi!


I would have translated the same as you did, Bilge, or maybe, looking for an alternate translation, I've thought for a while about "I'm fed up with being without you" - which doesn't sound that good-

Actually, I definitely think your translation with "I can't stand anymore" is better, according to the French version you provided me with (" Je n'en peux plus"

Thanks!
It all sounds like roughly the same meaning ("I feel unable to go on like this". Is everybody happy if I put your suggested alternative in the comments?
'It is no good' seems to have the same meaning here, implying "I have tried, but I have concluded I can't".

CC: Francky5591 Bilge Ertan

I agree. It is up to you Lein. Thanks Francky! Thank you guys