Oversættelse - Tyrkisk-Engelsk - tahir görgülü

Hi Serba,

I'd suggest a few changes in order to sound better in English. Tell me what you think, OK?

"Tahir Görgülü was born in 1970 in Ankara and he started his professional career right after his graduation, first(ly) in Ankara then in İzmir and abroad."

I removed that "for" which is not necessary.

Serba? Still alive?

thank you changed them..

Ankara, İzmir ve yurtdışında devam eden eğitiminden hemen sonra

he had education first in Ankara then Ä°zmir and then abroad and after all these he started his proffesional carrier" we agree don't we lilian?

Oh, now we agree! Have a look and tell me if that's what you wanted to say.