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42Traduction - Portuguais brésilien-Anglais - Para ela.

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Catégorie Poésie

Titre
Para ela.
Texte
Proposé par Thiago*
Langue de départ: Portuguais brésilien

Eu te amo,
Isto não da pra esconder,
Mas uma coisa é certa,
Este texto poucos vão entender,

Tudo para provar,
Que meu amor está,
Acima de qualquer língua,
Que meu amor está,
Acima do que posso mostrar,

Eu amo você e só você me fará felz.
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Titre
To her
Traduction
Anglais

Traduit par Diego_Kovags
Langue d'arrivée: Anglais

I love you
That can't be hidden
But there's a truth
This will be grasped by a few.

All to prove
That my love is
Above any language,
That my love is
Above what I can show.

I love you and only you will make me happy.
Dernière édition ou validation par lilian canale - 3 Mai 2008 02:52





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30 Avril 2008 18:23

lilian canale
Nombre de messages: 14972
Hi Diego,

This is a too literal translation for a poem.
Could you find some rhyme and still keep the original meaning?

3 Mai 2008 01:52

lilian canale
Nombre de messages: 14972
Hi Diego,

I would like to suggest some changes for the first lines to have some rhyme.
What about something like this?

I love you
that can't be hidden
but there's a truth
this will be grasped by a few.


What do you think?

Also

"...só você me fará feliz."
"...only you will make me happy"

3 Mai 2008 02:39

Diego_Kovags
Nombre de messages: 515
Lily! Thank you a lot!

I wouldn't know what to do
If there was not you!


Almost poetic, isn't it? :-P


3 Mai 2008 02:50

lilian canale
Nombre de messages: 14972
I'm glad you liked it!

Your poetic vain will eventually show off!