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תרגום - שוודית-אנגלית - Jag önskar ocksÃ¥ ta del av hur era kontrollsystem...

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הטקסט נגיש בשפות הבאות: שוודיתאנגלית

שם
Jag önskar också ta del av hur era kontrollsystem...
טקסט
נשלח על ידי kvitle
שפת המקור: שוודית

Jag önskar också ta del av hur era kontrollsystem generellt är uppbyggda och vilka åtgärder ni löpande vidtar för att säkerställa att inga av era produkter kan orsaka hälsoskada för slutkonsumenten

שם
I would also like to know how your control systems
תרגום
אנגלית

תורגם על ידי pias
שפת המטרה: אנגלית

I would also like to know how your control systems are in general assembled and what preventive measures you take regularly to assure that none of your products may cause health problems to consumers.
אושר לאחרונה ע"י lilian canale - 1 יולי 2008 02:32





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30 יוני 2008 15:40

lilian canale
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Hi Pia,

Is that "systems" or "system"?
You have to combine the plural noun with the plural form "are".
Anyway we'll have to make a change.
It'll be:
"...how your control systems are, in general (usually), assembled..."
or
"how your control system is, in general (usually) assembled..."

regular to secure ---> regularly to assure
can---> may
for the consumer ---> to consumers


What do you think?

30 יוני 2008 15:51

pias
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I think that you are right! I guess that they are talking about several control systems, so it's in plural, thank you for your explanation. I seems to forget that ALL the time .. How it works in English.

So, I'll edit to your suggestions

30 יוני 2008 18:17

lenab
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I would like to have the verb after "in general".
".. the control systems in general are assembled.." What do you think?

30 יוני 2008 18:28

pias
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Yes lenab, that sounds good to me! But I'm not the English expert, so we better wait and see what SHE THINKS!

30 יוני 2008 18:36

lilian canale
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If that "SHE" is me, I'd say that "in general" like "usually, commonly, always, never, etc..." has to be placed between the two parts of a compound tense or a passive voice like in this case.

30 יוני 2008 18:52

pias
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Yes, sorry ...I know your name Lilian.
So I guess that it's ok. as it is, right?

30 יוני 2008 22:43

lenab
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I aggree, now that I've read the swedish text again. I was thinking of the systems in general and how they were assemled! Sorry!

1 יולי 2008 12:21

pias
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You don't have to apologize lenab
At least I think it's good that you "make your voice heard", when you are in doubt about my or other translations.