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| | 8 July 2008 16:44 |
| | Hi Pia,
My turn!
" I'm going to educate me as it, that's my thought.."
What do you mean?
"I intend to become one (hairdresser)"
or
"I intend to take a course to be/become one" ?
Also "I'm a 19-year-old..." |
| | 8 July 2008 17:04 |
| piasNumber of messages: 8113 | Yes, "bollen är din"
The meaning is: first she says that she is a hairdresser, but then she corrects her self and tells that she intends to take a course (study) to become one ...and in the end she says that this is her thoughts, what she have in mind to do. Sorry my explanation ...did you get it?
New try here: "Hello! I'm a 19-year-old girl, I'm a hairdresser or I intend to take a course to be one, that's my thought.."
Better? |
| | 8 July 2008 20:31 |
| piasNumber of messages: 8113 | |
| | 8 July 2008 20:40 |
| | I see that you want to use that "that's my thought", but that's not very common in English.
The use of the verb "intend" already shows that she has that in mind, the "intention" of taking the course. If you want to break the sentence in order to insert those words, you can change it into:
"Hello! I'm a 19-year-old girl, I'm a hairdresser or I'll take a course to be one, that's my intention/will.."
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| | 8 July 2008 20:42 |
| piasNumber of messages: 8113 | Thanks Lilian for the good explain.
I'll edit! |
| | 8 July 2008 20:43 |
| | explanation! |
| | 8 July 2008 20:44 |
| piasNumber of messages: 8113 | YES, you are like a teacher. |
| | 8 July 2008 20:46 |
| | I am a teacher! |
| | 8 July 2008 20:47 |
| piasNumber of messages: 8113 | OK, IT'S EXPLANATION!!!!! |
| | 8 July 2008 20:52 |
| piasNumber of messages: 8113 | You are? I didn't knew that! In what age group
are you teaching? |
| | 8 July 2008 20:57 |
| | I teach mostly adults. MBA and T.O.E.F.L |
| | 8 July 2008 21:11 |
| piasNumber of messages: 8113 | Oh, I see! In Spanish and English? |
| | 8 July 2008 21:29 |
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