Μετάφραση - Σερβικά-Αγγλικά - Pisem vam ovo pismo u nalogu za konkurisanje...

Hi Frkica,

There are some mistakes in your English. I would suggest ths following text, but I don't speak Serbian. Could you let me know if my suggestion is a good translation? Then I can edit and set a poll. Thanks!

With this letter I would like to apply for the position in your company whichI saw at the website infostud.com. I am interested in the job of office manager for your company* in Indjija. I graduated from Novi Sad University Business School in 2010. I do not have any work experience but I am a good team worker** and willing to invest the necessary time and effort to meet your goals. I am interested to keep improving my knowledge, skills and capabilities required for this job.

* or should this be 'for your company's office in Indjija'?
** is this what you mean by 'ready to collaborate?

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I will make the edits suggested above and set a poll.

* you're right. I tried to translate this text fast, so I've missed the meaning of the expression
** I tried to capture the intention of the speaker... You're right, "spremna sam na saradnju" literally means: "ready to collaborate", but, in this case she is looking for job in a firm, so it is better to say: " I'm a team worker"....