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| | 2007年 अक्टोबर 7日 12:47 |
| | These expressions (and also some spelling) don't seem quite accurate to me:
-last year I went to Grenoble
-where did you stay |
| | 2007年 अक्टोबर 7日 13:50 |
| piasचिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 8113 | Thank you Maribel, I correct that. |
| | 2007年 अक्टोबर 10日 02:15 |
| | Form of translation before I edited it:
The entire last year I spent in Grenoble. The town it self is´nt really beautiful but my general impression is: the town of my dreams. I know the town well and are on my way there again
in 6 days. Where did you live, I might be able to give you some tips if you don´t know this town as well?
Take care! |
| | 2007年 अक्टोबर 10日 04:50 |
| | Considering with the French version, the Verb 'habiter' isn't in the past tense, so I THINK it could be: Where do you live so that I could give you some information in the case you don't know it (the town) very well? Enjoy your stay! |
| | 2007年 अक्टोबर 10日 04:34 |
| Freyaचिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 1910 | "I know the town really well"
"some tips"-"some advice"/"indications"
"in case you don't know it so well"
"Bon séjour"-"Have a nice staying (in here)!" |
| | 2007年 अक्टोबर 10日 11:08 |
| | "bon séjour" enjoy your stay |
| | 2007年 अक्टोबर 10日 11:22 |
| piasचिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 8113 | Hi people.
Thanks for advice, I will correct last sense. |
| | 2007年 अक्टोबर 10日 11:26 |
| | I agree with Angelus, it should be "do" and not "did". |
| | 2007年 अक्टोबर 10日 11:56 |
| | Based on the French translation, tis text seems to be cut in tiny sentences. Not very fluid, IMO. |
| | 2007年 अक्टोबर 10日 22:12 |
| | The translation from the French has taken a bit too much liberty throughout the translation. |
| | 2007年 अक्टोबर 11日 00:23 |
| | As a whole the translation is barely OK. Some of the meaning in the translation from Swedish is "lost":
1. "isn't really beautiful" will be better (Meaning only)as: " The city/town itself isn't beautiful but otherwise it's the city/town of my dreams"
2. "Enjoy your stay!" is better translated (Meaning only) as "Take care!" |
| | 2007年 अक्टोबर 11日 10:58 |
| piasचिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 8113 | Hi people, thanks for advice!
I will correct a few things, the text seem to be more fluid the way figge2001 suggested, and the last tense has to be Take care...as it first was. In the swedish origin text it is NOT saying Enjoy your stay! or have a nice stay.
The Swedish origin text is more like: you have to look after your self / take care.
I hope this is ok. now.. |
| | 2007年 अक्टोबर 11日 11:54 |
| | As it is a "meaning only" translation I think it is good and can be validated CC: Porfyhr |
| | 2007年 अक्टोबर 11日 13:51 |
| Xiniचिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 1655 | Hey Mats, nice to meet you here again! |
| | 2007年 अक्टोबर 11日 14:31 |
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| | 2007年 अक्टोबर 11日 14:32 |
| | salutare.............ce faceti? |
| | 2007年 अक्टोबर 11日 20:57 |
| | Salut, Hello, Hi
Je pense que le mot "beautiful" est trop fort ici. Le mot utilisé en français est "jolie" et je pense qu'en anglais le mot "pretty" convient mieux pour décrire une ville. |
| | 2007年 अक्टोबर 12日 01:35 |
| | Well, I guess it reflects the Swedish original enough now, and can be validated!
Thanks everybody! |