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Dịch - Swedish-English - Jag önskar ocksÃ¥ ta del av hur era kontrollsystem...

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Jag önskar också ta del av hur era kontrollsystem...
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Submitted by kvitle
Source language: Swedish

Jag önskar också ta del av hur era kontrollsystem generellt är uppbyggda och vilka åtgärder ni löpande vidtar för att säkerställa att inga av era produkter kan orsaka hälsoskada för slutkonsumenten

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I would also like to know how your control systems
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Translated by pias
Target language: English

I would also like to know how your control systems are in general assembled and what preventive measures you take regularly to assure that none of your products may cause health problems to consumers.
Validated by lilian canale - 1 Tháng 7 2008 02:32





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30 Tháng 6 2008 15:40

lilian canale
Tổng số bài gửi: 14972
Hi Pia,

Is that "systems" or "system"?
You have to combine the plural noun with the plural form "are".
Anyway we'll have to make a change.
It'll be:
"...how your control systems are, in general (usually), assembled..."
or
"how your control system is, in general (usually) assembled..."

regular to secure ---> regularly to assure
can---> may
for the consumer ---> to consumers


What do you think?

30 Tháng 6 2008 15:51

pias
Tổng số bài gửi: 8113
I think that you are right! I guess that they are talking about several control systems, so it's in plural, thank you for your explanation. I seems to forget that ALL the time .. How it works in English.

So, I'll edit to your suggestions

30 Tháng 6 2008 18:17

lenab
Tổng số bài gửi: 1084
I would like to have the verb after "in general".
".. the control systems in general are assembled.." What do you think?

30 Tháng 6 2008 18:28

pias
Tổng số bài gửi: 8113
Yes lenab, that sounds good to me! But I'm not the English expert, so we better wait and see what SHE THINKS!

30 Tháng 6 2008 18:36

lilian canale
Tổng số bài gửi: 14972
If that "SHE" is me, I'd say that "in general" like "usually, commonly, always, never, etc..." has to be placed between the two parts of a compound tense or a passive voice like in this case.

30 Tháng 6 2008 18:52

pias
Tổng số bài gửi: 8113
Yes, sorry ...I know your name Lilian.
So I guess that it's ok. as it is, right?

30 Tháng 6 2008 22:43

lenab
Tổng số bài gửi: 1084
I aggree, now that I've read the swedish text again. I was thinking of the systems in general and how they were assemled! Sorry!

1 Tháng 7 2008 12:21

pias
Tổng số bài gửi: 8113
You don't have to apologize lenab
At least I think it's good that you "make your voice heard", when you are in doubt about my or other translations.