Translation - Engels-Hebreeus - If destiny is kind i have the rest on my mindCurrent status Translation
Category Song - Daily life | If destiny is kind i have the rest on my mind | | Source language: Engels
If destiny is kind i have the rest on my mind |
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| ×× ×”×’×•×¨×œ ×לי × ×“×™×‘ כל הש×ר בכף ידי | | Target language: Hebreeus
×× ×”×’×•×¨×œ ×לי × ×“×™×‘ כל הש×ר בכף ידי |
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Laaste geakkrediteerde redigering deur ittaihen - 24 August 2008 20:21
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17 August 2008 12:58 | | | Hi zehavit 
Your translation is very nicely worded, but I have a feeling, based on the French translation, that this had not been the intent. In French they used 'l'esprit tranquille' (an easy mind) to translate 'rest', so I think perhaps in this case we need the 'relaxed' sense of 'rest', which also makes more sense in this phrase. Could you try to change your translation accordingly?
thanks,
libera
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17 August 2008 13:21 | | | ×× ×”×’×•×¨×œ ×לי × ×“×™×‘ הר×ש שלי שקט ו×× ×™ שלו ורגוע |
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