Cucumis - خدمات رایگان ترجمه آنلاین
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ترجمه - اندونزیایی-انگلیسی - untuk kenyamanan dan mencegah ...

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این متن به زبانهای زیر قابل دسترسی می باشد: اندونزیاییانگلیسی

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این درخواست ترجمه "فقط معنی" می باشد.
عنوان
untuk kenyamanan dan mencegah ...
متن
abu fatmah پیشنهاد شده توسط
زبان مبداء: اندونزیایی

untuk kenyamanan dan mencegah bakteri, usapkan tissue basah antisetik super magice manpada alat vital anda. diamkan selama 15 menit

supeer magic man menyegakran serta membersihkan kulit dengan efektif meningkatkan kekuatan dan mencegah ejakulasi dini

عنوان
Antiseptic for your private parts
ترجمه
انگلیسی

gbernsdorff ترجمه شده توسط
زبان مقصد: انگلیسی

For a fresh feeling and to prevent bacterial infections, rub the moist antiseptic tissue Super Magic Man on your private parts and leave it for 15 minutes. Super Magic Man is effective in refreshing and cleansing your skin, strengthens your power and prevents premature ejaculations.
ملاحظاتی درباره ترجمه
As interpunction and conjunctions are lacking the second sentence could also be rendered as follows: 'Super Magic Man refreshes and cleanses your skin and is effective in strengthening your power and preventing premature ejaculations'.

Edited "privates" to "private parts" - Tantine 6/2/08
Which is of course quite a different claim ...

آخرین دارای اعتبار یا ویرایش شده توسط Tantine - 26 می 2009 23:46





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7 فوریه 2009 00:00

Tantine
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Hi gbernsdorff

I have done a minor edit to your translation and have set a poll.

Bises
Tantine

28 فوریه 2009 16:49

gbernsdorff
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Bonjour Tantine,
Thanks for your message. I am new to cucumis and, so I learned, the only one translating Indonesian(for which there are no experts). I'll probably never get my translation evaluated. So be it.
I'd like to know, though, why you edited *privates*. I've encountered it (without parts) a number of times. Jargon médical? Or just plain bad English?
And, second, what happens when somebody *sets a poll*?
Regards,
Guido

4 مارس 2009 22:11

dkyle2002
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For comfort and to prevent bacteria, apply antiseptic wet tissue Super Magic Man on your genital area and leave it for 15 minutes.

Super Magic Man refreshes and cleans the skin with effectively increases the strength and prevents premature ejaculation.

22 مارس 2009 20:41

gbernsdorff
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Dkyle2002:
Thanks for your suggestion. The Malay text uses a euphemism (alat vital) instead of daerah genital. Therefore I have used a euphemism (private parts) in English as well.

22 مارس 2009 20:41

gbernsdorff
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Tantine?
What is a poll on cucumis, and where can I read up on it? And why do you prefer *private parts* to *privates*?
Thank you.

24 آوریل 2009 05:31

duche
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some of the words translated is not quite right