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讨论区 句子 - 爱 / 友谊

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Liefde delen
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提交 2laraaa
源语言: 荷兰语

Begrijp in die liefde,
Die ik met jou wil delen,
Niet zomaar een liefde,
Maar liefde voor het leven.

Geloof.

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Sharing love
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英语

翻译 maki_sindja
目的语言: 英语

Understand this love,
I want to share with you.
Not just any love,
but love for life.

Believe.
lilian canale认可或编辑 - 2012年 三月 23日 22:33





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2012年 三月 22日 14:12

Lein
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The meaning is ok but some of the feeling and poetic formulation seems to have got lost in the translation, mainly because the sentence has been split in two and because 'in' has been removed / avoided.

Just a suggestion, I'm happy to help brainstorming if you like:

Know in that love
I want to share with you
Not just any love
But love for life

As for 'faith', this may very well be what was intended - but another equally possible translation (I think) would be 'Believe' (as in, 'believe me'. In Dutch, 'belief', 'believe' and 'faith' all look exactly the same. Maybe the requester can tell us which meaning she meant.

2laraaa, bedoel je met 'Geloof' zo ongeveer 'geloof mij', 'geloof dit'? Of meer iets als 'heb vertrouwen'?

2012年 三月 22日 23:33

maki_sindja
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Lein, I like your suggestion very much.

Let's wait for 2laraaa's answer...

2012年 三月 23日 17:00

2laraaa
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Hoi Lein,

Het gevoel lijkt er een beetje uit ja. Maar de eerste zin vond ik prima: "understand that love". Toch?
Wat ik bedoel met geloof is: geloof dit. "Believe", is wel een betere vertaling met wat ik bedoel.

Dus:

Understand this love,
I want to share with you.
Not just any love,
but love for life.

Believe.

Dankjewel Lein en Maki_Sindja.

2012年 三月 23日 19:22

Lein
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Dank je wel!
Lilian, as you will have guessed, above is 2laraaa's suggestion, which is another good option in my opinion.