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42Translation - Portuguese brazilian-English - Para ela.

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Category Poetry

Title
Para ela.
Text
Submitted by Thiago*
Source language: Portuguese brazilian

Eu te amo,
Isto não da pra esconder,
Mas uma coisa é certa,
Este texto poucos vão entender,

Tudo para provar,
Que meu amor está,
Acima de qualquer língua,
Que meu amor está,
Acima do que posso mostrar,

Eu amo você e só você me fará felz.
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Title
To her
Translation
English

Translated by Diego_Kovags
Target language: English

I love you
That can't be hidden
But there's a truth
This will be grasped by a few.

All to prove
That my love is
Above any language,
That my love is
Above what I can show.

I love you and only you will make me happy.
Validated by lilian canale - 3 May 2008 02:52





Last messages

Author
Message

30 April 2008 18:23

lilian canale
Number of messages: 14972
Hi Diego,

This is a too literal translation for a poem.
Could you find some rhyme and still keep the original meaning?

3 May 2008 01:52

lilian canale
Number of messages: 14972
Hi Diego,

I would like to suggest some changes for the first lines to have some rhyme.
What about something like this?

I love you
that can't be hidden
but there's a truth
this will be grasped by a few.


What do you think?

Also

"...só você me fará feliz."
"...only you will make me happy"

3 May 2008 02:39

Diego_Kovags
Number of messages: 515
Lily! Thank you a lot!

I wouldn't know what to do
If there was not you!


Almost poetic, isn't it? :-P


3 May 2008 02:50

lilian canale
Number of messages: 14972
I'm glad you liked it!

Your poetic vain will eventually show off!