Umseting - Italskt-Hollendskt - quello che ti ho fatto....quello che ho fatto a...

Hi all,

I've translated from Italian and with a bit of help from Italo. I'm getting positive votes but I noticed the tone in my translation is more positive / hopeful than in the English translation. This is mainly due to my use of 'strength' instead of 'nerve' and 'draw back' or 'pull back', meaning something like 'retrieve' for 'tirare fuori'. It is mainly this 'tirare fuori' I'm not sure about. Here is a bridge for my translation:

What I have done to you... what I have done to both of us is shameful / disgraceful but if you have the strength to make me beg forgiveness for my deeds then you will have the strength to get back the love I feel for you.

Italo's bridge:
Das, was ich dir getan habe...das, was ich uns beide getan habe ist scheußlich, aber wenn du die Kraft haben wirst, mich bitten mein Übel zu verzeihen, wirst du die Krafr haben, die Liebe rauszuziehen, die ich für dich empfinde/habe.

Is the translation, including the positive-ish feel, ok? Thanks for your help!

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I can't tell.
It's too difficult for me.

I think this is the right translation that you gave me Lein, Thank you so much!!

You're welcome!
I'll just wait a bit longer with the validation in case any other Italian experts offer their opinion

But like i know this person i know that this is the right translation!

Ah, that helps! Thanks, I'll validate!