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翻译 - 波兰语-英语 - Metamorfoza życia当前状态 翻译
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讨论区 诗歌 - 爱 / 友谊 | | | 源语言: 波兰语
Metamorfoza życia
nie pamięta już
dlaczego chciała umrzeć
dlaczego
skrycie umierała
pozwoliła na bezsens
nie rozumiała że życie
panta rhei
metamorfoza nieustajÄ…ca
raniÄ…ca
że jednak pełna nadziei
jutro też jest dzień
ciekawe
co siÄ™ we mnie
zmieni | | |
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| | | 目的语言: 英语
Metamorphosis of life
She no longer remembers
Why she wanted to die
Why
She's been dying secretly
And let the nonsense stay*
And didn't understand that life
"panta rhei"
The constant metamorphosis,
Hurting
Yet still full of hope
Tomorrow is another day
I wonder
What is going to change
In me
| | * - it's not the exact translation, but as long as the requester accepts it, it's fine:)
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2009年 十月 6日 11:35 | | | "panta rhei" isn't Latin, but transliteration of Antient Greek sentence ("everything flows"?) 
Yes, I wanted to leave the tranliterated version.
Well, Ania, I wouldn't use unpersonal "it" here. The author of the poem ( ) is the unspecified subject ...  So, you can use optionally "she" hehe... | | |
2009年 十月 6日 14:46 | | | riiight ... i didn't know that, i should have asked you first. I'll correct it in a second | | |
2009年 十月 6日 17:12 | | | This looks good to me 
I'd just put "panta rhei" in quotation marks and remove that "to" before "stay" | | |
2009年 十月 7日 11:59 | | | That's great for me, but one line:"(She)Doesn’t remember" - can we remove "(she)"?
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2009年 十月 7日 17:12 | | | | | |
2009年 十月 7日 19:46 | | | where would you put "wondering"? | | |
2009年 十月 7日 20:10 | | | Instead of :"(She)Doesn’t remember" | | |
2009年 十月 7日 21:59 | | | sounds good to me Aneta, what do you think? | | |
2009年 十月 8日 09:38 | | | Why, don't translate it directly from Polish?
nie pamięta już = she hasn't remember yet
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2009年 十月 8日 12:41 | | | I thought you didn't want 'she' to be used  | | |
2009年 十月 8日 12:55 | | | I didn't want only brackets | | |
2009年 十月 8日 13:07 | | | Oh, OK | | |
2009年 十月 8日 13:16 | | | Thank you, dear Lilly!
And let the nonsense stay* is also perfect here!
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2009年 十月 8日 14:26 | | | Oh, Lilly, I don't know if "still" is good here:
She still hasn't remembered
Literally this line means:
She hasn't remember anymore... | | |
2009年 十月 8日 16:13 | | | Aneta, I used 'still' because you had used 'yet' in your post (she hasn't remembered yet ), but if you say it should be "anymore" then the verb tense should also change.
"She doesn't remember anymore" or "She no longer remembers" | | |
2009年 十月 8日 15:43 | | | Wow! Of course. I sometimes don't know which tense is correct... Still learning...
Thank you, Lilly! |
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