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yıldızların görünmediği zamanlar da yıldız yok ...
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Öneri khouan
Kaynak dil: Türkçe

Yıldızların görünmediği zamanlarda yıldız yoktur.
Söylemem.
Sevdiklerime ulaşamıyorsam, ulaştıklarımı sevmeye çalışmayacağım.
Gece bulut yoktur.
Öyleyse o gün bugündür.
Çeviriyle ilgili açıklamalar
edited by = Hazal =

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Stars
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Çeviri 44hazal44
Hedef dil: İngilizce

There are no stars when stars cannot be seen.
I won't say it.
If I can't be with the ones I love, I won't try to love the ones I'm with.
There are no clouds at night.
If that's the way it is, that day is today.

Çeviriyle ilgili açıklamalar
get/reach
En son lilian canale tarafından onaylandı - 11 Haziran 2010 20:13





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6 Haziran 2010 16:38

cheesecake
Mesaj Sayısı: 980
Hi Hazal

I think it would be better if we say
"If I can't get/reach whom I like/love, I won't try to like/love whom I have reached/ whom I can reach."
as I think "sevdiklerim" is used for the people he loves. (family, friends etc..)

There are no stars when we can't see any.->
"No stars exist/ There are no stars when they cannot be seen."

9 Haziran 2010 22:22

merdogan
Mesaj Sayısı: 3769
I agree with cheesecake.

10 Haziran 2010 17:58

44hazal44
Mesaj Sayısı: 1148
Hi Cheesecake,

Thank you for the corrections.
You're right for the second one but I think both translations are right for the first one because when someone says "sevdiklerim", we immediately think he's talking about the people he loves. But here, by "sevdiklerim", he could also mean "sevdiÄŸim ÅŸeyler"(the things I like).
So I think we should add the second option in the remarks field.

And a just small typing mistake in the last line, I wrote "that day it today" insead of "that day is today". I would be happy if you corrected it, Lilian.

10 Haziran 2010 21:52

Rant
Mesaj Sayısı: 20
"there is no star" and "there is no cloud" may be the right translation, because these are stated as singular in the source text. And "reach" should replace the word "get".

10 Haziran 2010 21:54

merdogan
Mesaj Sayısı: 3769
and Line 1 ?

11 Haziran 2010 18:51

lilian canale
Mesaj Sayısı: 14972
Hi Kafetzou,
Could you help here?

CC: kafetzou

11 Haziran 2010 20:00

kafetzou
Mesaj Sayısı: 7963
I would say, "If I can't be with the ones I love, I won't try to love the ones I'm with," although this is ambiguous in Turkish. It's not clear whether it's a thing or a person that is loved, and it's not clear whether it's loved or liked, so this presents a conundrum of sorts.

Cheesecake, I disagree with you regarding your re-translation of "Gece bulut yoktur" - I think that it should stand as "There are no clouds at night." It's not necessary to interpret that - it was worded poetically and the figurative meaning can be understood in English. That said, "clouds" has to be plural in English because it's a general statement of fact. The rules for pluralization are different in Turkish and English, and that's the reason why, so ...

There are no stars when stars cannot be seen.
I won't say it.
If I can't be with the ones I love, I won't try to love the ones I'm with.
There are no clouds at night.
If that's the way it is, that day is today.


Note: I changed "so" to "if that's the way it is" for clarity and grammar.

11 Haziran 2010 20:15

lilian canale
Mesaj Sayısı: 14972
Thanks Kafetzou, I think that sounds better.

11 Haziran 2010 20:18

kafetzou
Mesaj Sayısı: 7963
Good - glad I could help.


11 Haziran 2010 23:42

44hazal44
Mesaj Sayısı: 1148
Thank you all.

12 Haziran 2010 08:03

khouan
Mesaj Sayısı: 5
Hi there
thank you all of you guys to get me the meaning
it mean so much to me

have a good day