2 sene sonra üniversite okuyacağım.üniversiteyi Kore'de okumak istiyorum.umarım bunu başarırım.eğer oraya gelebilirsem lütfen benimle tanışma sözü ver.kendine dikkat et ve güçlü ol.biz daima senin arkandayız.ayrıca kısa saçla çok tatlı gözüküyorsun.
I am going to go to university in two years. I want to study at a university in Korea. I hope I will achieve this. If I could come there, please promise to meet me. Take care of yourself and be strong. We're always behind you. By the way, you look so sweet with short hair.
Última validación o corrección por Lein - 20 Septiembre 2011 14:20
First of all, the context tells us that the author will go to university in two years time, or two years from now. Two years later doesn't work here because the reader won't know what the "later" is in reference to.
Another obvious mistake: "please promise to make the introduction". Not only does this sound unnatural in English; it's also a mistranslation of the source text. This should be "please promise to meet me".
I'd also change the "we always stand behind you" to a more natural-sounding "we're always behind you", or "we'll always support you", etc. Also- "cute" is better than "sweet" here, I think.