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| | 7 July 2007 08:02 |
| XiniNumber of messages: 1655 | jag tycker faktiskt mer synd om personen du utnyttjar än mig.
I'm really doubtful about this sentence...
I need some advice. |
| | 7 July 2007 10:03 |
| | Well done! My comments:
-människa can be either female or male, does it need a remark or something?
-literally: I'm more sorry for the people you take advantge of than myself...("use" is ok of course, but "against me"...) |
| | 7 July 2007 10:19 |
| XiniNumber of messages: 1655 | Thank you.
I changed "man" into "person".
I changed that sentence too...I forgot the "mer" so i didn't understand the "än"...
Now let's wait for the English experts.
There is a point about comparative...I don't understand why shouldn't it be "sorrier"...sometimes I find the "more+adj" form instead of the "adj+ER", also if the adjective has 2 syllables only... |
| | 8 July 2007 02:59 |
| | press --> put pressure on?
cry --> am crying
adantage --> advantage |
| | 8 July 2007 07:44 |
| XiniNumber of messages: 1655 | |
| | 9 July 2007 02:15 |
| SESYKNumber of messages: 2 | Du har fel.Alltid bara fel. Du tror att du trycker ner mig med alla dina ord. Du skriver mer och mer för att få mig att må dåligt. Men det hjälper inte. Om du tror att jag gråter över det har du fel. Jag är en stark människa och jag tycker faktiskt mer synd om personen du utnyttjar än mig. Innerst inne skrattar jag bara. Åh,om du bara visste. |
| | 9 July 2007 02:36 |
| | This looks the same as the original text, with only two differences:
I took out the word "you" from the 4th sentence, and changed the word "just" in the last sentence to "only". Is it OK now? |
| | 9 July 2007 06:33 |
| XiniNumber of messages: 1655 | I'm not sure it's ok now. If you omit "you", it's imperative...and it should be "skriv" as imperative, while here the subject is kept from the previous sentence, I bet. |
| | 9 July 2007 13:11 |
| | OK - thanks, Xini - I made another change to make it work grammatically - is it OK, now? |
| | 9 July 2007 14:28 |
| XiniNumber of messages: 1655 | I hope yes. You may want to wait for more poll results. |
| | 10 July 2007 04:50 |
| | Well ... I'd like to make SESYK happy, but he hasn't said if it's OK now. |