Translation - Turkish-English - Gerçekten Israil'e gelmek istiyorum fakat şuanki...

Dear lilian,
I have to add last line as " I love you my love."
thanks...

ikinci cümlenin çevirisi 'So, i will try to come next year or at a time when i shall be free...' şeklinde olmalı

Dear Atiro,
wellcome
Please write in English what you want to say.
and "i" has to be "I".
on the other side we are trying to find only "the meaning" not one by one.

Hi merdogan, I believe that the writer is trying to say "I will try to come to Israel next year or (veya) when I could be available" which means I could come before next year or even later than next year (when I am available), which is different than your sentence because the meaning changes.
So I think if there was no "veya", then your version could have been right but in this case it should be editted

ilk cümle doğru ama iknci cümlede çevrilecek metinde bir dahaki sene VEYA serbest olabildiğim zaman diyor. oysa çeviride bu cümle seneye müsait olduğum zamanda olarak çevrilmiş.