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Translation - Polish-English - Moje niebo

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กลุ่ม Poetry

Title
Moje niebo
Text
Submitted by Aneta B.
Source language: Polish

Moje niebo

Ponoć to nie miejsce
I nikt tam nie był
Ale ja to po prostu
Przeżyłam
Zapomniałam kim jestem
Co tu robiÄ™ i dlaczego
I tylko
Patrzyłam

A on tłumaczył
Moje myśli
I pragnienia
Słuchałam
Wiem na pewno
- Znał mnie lepiej
Kochał bardziej
Niż ja sama
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British English

Title
My Heaven
Translation
English

Translated by iluvmilka
Target language: English

My Heaven

Apparently it’s not a place
And nobody has ever been there
But I have experienced it
I forgot who I was
What I was doing here and why
And I was just
Looking

And he was explaining
My thoughts
And desires
I was listening
And I know for sure
- He knew me better
And loved me more
Than I did myself
Validated by kafetzou - 9 October 2009 18:33





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28 September 2009 21:40

Aneta B.
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Thank you so much, Ania! (there )

28 September 2009 22:17

iluvmilka
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well spotted

28 September 2009 22:19

Aneta B.
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3 October 2009 09:06

kafetzou
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Wow - this looks almost perfect.

I would just change the last line to "Than I did myself".

3 October 2009 09:26

Aneta B.
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Wow! Yes, Ania is a great translator and she knows Polish very well and really understands poetry...
Thank you, Laura!

3 October 2009 17:55

iluvmilka
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good good
Im glad u like it