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翻译 - 挪威语-英语 - jeg ogsÃ¥ føler meg ensom og litt trist..uten...当前状态 翻译
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| jeg ogsÃ¥ føler meg ensom og litt trist..uten... | | 源语言: 挪威语
jeg også føler meg ensom og litt trist..uten særlig grunn. i morgen vi har konferanse om aids..og kvinner..gruer meg veldig. jeg bestilte internett, jeg skal få nettlinje neste uke..da kan vi møtes på msn. jeg sender en link der jeg jobber..les den hvis du gidder, du kommer ikke til å angre..det er morsomt.snakkes |
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| I feel lonely and a bit bored too..for no | | 目的语言: 英语
I feel lonely and a bit bored too..for no particular reason. tomorrow we will have a conference about aids..and women..I dread a lot. I ordered Internet, I will have a connection next week..then we can meet at msn. I'm sending you a link to my work..read it if you feel like it, you will not regret..it is funny.see you | | The source is written with smal letters, so I did the same here. |
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2008年 四月 28日 17:27 | | |  Hi Pia,
Good work!
just a couple of remarks:
boring ----> bored
a/the connection
"I send you a link to my work..read it if you have the energy,"
Perhaps "I'm sending (I'll send)....read it if you feel like,..."
What do you think? | | |
2008年 四月 28日 17:42 | | | Ah, I thought that she felt that "she was a boring person"  , not that she was bored (about her situation). Yes, you are right about the rest!
I'll edit, and thank you for your kind word. | | |
2008年 四月 28日 22:05 | | | "trist" could be translated to "bored" but in this connection i think it's supposed to be "sad". it should be: "I dread IT a lot", "...meet ON msn", "i'm sending you a link FROM my JOB", "read it if you feel like IT", "you will not regret IT". Too many mistakes leaving out the pronoun "it". | | |
2008年 四月 28日 22:31 | | | Hi Lilian, OrdinaryCat
I left the "IT" out because of the structure of the source text. But I think that "I dread IT a lot" and "on msn" sounds like good ideas..
Shall I edit Lilian?
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2008年 四月 28日 22:37 | | | Hi Pia,
The only compulsory edition is perhaps "feel like it".
"on/at msn" is optional. | | |
2008年 四月 28日 22:53 | | | Ok, I see.
So I 'll edit only "feel like it".
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