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翻译 - 波斯語-英语 - كودكي ياد گرÙتم كه مي خواست آب شور当前状态 翻译
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مهرباني را از كودكي ياد گرÙتم كه مي خواست آب شور دريا را با آبنياتش شيرين كند
اگر كسي را دوست داري به او بگو، زيرا قلبها معمولاً‌ با كلماتي كه ناگÙته مي ماند، ميشكنند | | Would like to get translated into english/U.S.
This is from a friends blog site and cannot find an online translator for Farsi/Persian only Arabic, and that does not give best results. |
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| I learned kindness from the child who... | | 目的语言: 英语
I learned kindness from the child who tried to sweeten the salty sea water with his candy.
If you love someone, tell him/her, because the hearts are usually broken by those words that remain unsaid.
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2009年 二月 10日 14:41 | | | Hi ghasemkiani,
I'd say:
"... because the unsaid words are what breaks the hearts."
What do you think? 
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2009年 二月 10日 16:10 | | | Hello,
Thanks for the suggestion. Your expression sounds better, but shouldn't it be "are what break the hearts" (plural)? Besides, can we somehow insert the word "usually" in it?
On the other hand, the structure "it is ... that ..." is quite common and valid in English. My only doubt is about the "words" being plural and maybe somehow inconsistent with "it is".
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2009年 二月 10日 16:26 | | | Lilian,
Please see this translation, too:
"... because the hearts are usually broken by the words that remain untold."
This is an exact translation of the Persian source. Do you agree with this translation? | | |
2009年 二月 10日 16:32 | | | The verb could be plural in a different structure, ie:
"the unsaid words are those which break the hearts"
but 'what' takes a singular form, like in:
"Honesty and hard work are what matters"
And you can insert "usually", of course.
{edit} About that other version, yes it's fine to me. I'd just change "the words" into "those words" and "untold"' into "unsaid". | | |
2009年 二月 10日 16:36 | | | That's a beautiful thought. | | |
2009年 二月 10日 16:37 | | | Many thanks for all your valuable help, lilian canale. I changed "untold" to "unsaid", using the new version of the translation. |
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