翻译 - 巴西葡萄牙语-英语 - Sacro ImpÃ©rio ComposiÃ§Ã£o sagrada em fogos...

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标题	Sacro ImpÃ©rio ComposiÃ§Ã£o sagrada em fogos...
正文提交 casper tavernello	源语言: 巴西葡萄牙语 Sacro ImpÃ©rio ComposiÃ§Ã£o sagrada em fogos apagados ExperimentaÃ§Ã£o Mestre da hipnose congrega fantasmas AnfÃbios mergulhados em solo infÃ©rtil Transe de um corpo inerte Todos os semelhantes se precipitam Caos na exposiÃ§Ã£o Um Ãºnico ser parado na parede Gritos calados pelo alÃ§apÃ£o Preguem-no Luzes os trazem de volta Ã escuridÃ£o Ajoelham-se Palavras repetidas se oferecem O rei ainda nÃ£o estÃ¡ satisfeito AcolherÃ£o amanhÃ£ um novo eleito Julguem-no Alterando-nos
给这篇翻译加备注	precipitar-se = cair Ã frente. <<Sacro ImpÃ©rio>> is an allusion to the Holy Roman Empire

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Sacred Empire

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Holy Empire
Holy arrangement of extinguished fires
Experimentation
Master of hypnosis makes ghosts congregate
Amphibians buried in infertile ground
Ecstasy of an immobile body

All the similar ones hurry
Chaos in the exposition
A lone being standing on the wall
Silent screams for the snare

Nail him down

Lights bring them back to the darkness
They kneel down
Repeated words offer themselves up
The king still is not satisfied
Tomorrow they'll shelter a newly chosen one

Judge him
Changing us

由kafetzou认可或编辑 - 2007年十月 1日 05:25

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	作者	帖子
		2007年九月 28日 16:58
	casper tavernello 文章总计: 5057	Holy Empire.
		2007年九月 28日 17:24
	Porfyhr 文章总计: 793	With respect for your language Casper, I felt that this was like a medieval text, and the expression "Holy Empire" should be translated as the "Holy See", equally to the process a.k.a. "the inquisition". What do you think about that?
		2007年九月 29日 05:41
	kafetzou 文章总计: 7963	I've made a few edits. "Holy See" refers only to the Papacy, Porfyhr. CC: Porfyhr
		2007年九月 29日 08:13
	Freya 文章总计: 1910	some ideas:submerged-burried, inert-moveless, all the similar ones-all of a kind(?), "the king still isn't satisfied"(ainda means still, yet)
		2007年九月 29日 13:38
	Dalmo 文章总计: 12	There are quite a few words that aren't literally translated (i.e. ser=being)
		2007年九月 29日 14:57
	kafetzou 文章总计: 7963	Thank you, everyone. Is it OK now? What does "composition" mean here? CC: Dalmo Porfyhr Freya
		2007年九月 29日 15:23
	Freya 文章总计: 1910	Yes. In my opinion the translation is good now. "composition" is a metaphore which describes the empire.The empire is seen as a composition of people that have been blessed in extinguished fires. That's my guess, but I'm not sure.
		2007年九月 29日 15:36
	kafetzou 文章总计: 7963	How about "confederation", then? A composition is most often a written essay in English. CC: Freya
		2007年九月 29日 15:41
	kafetzou 文章总计: 7963	Now that I'm re-reading it, the phrase "nail him" bothers me. What is it supposed to mean? As in "nail him to the cross", or what? Also, what is "Silent screams for the snare"?
		2007年九月 29日 15:41
	Freya 文章总计: 1910	If you agree with my way of translating the word" composition", I believe that "confederation" is a good choice but the others can have different opinions about "composition".We'd better wait for other ideas.
		2007年九月 29日 15:45
	casper tavernello 文章总计: 5057	"ComposiÃ§Ã£o" is the way you arrange things so they get a special magic (often used on Eastern religions).
		2007年九月 29日 15:45
	Freya 文章总计: 1910	"pregar" means "to clamp" or "to nail" and "preguem-no" = "clamp him "
		2007年九月 29日 15:56
	casper tavernello 文章总计: 5057	Pregar could be "to nail" and "to preach". I see that I forgot to explain a lot of things.
		2007年九月 29日 15:55
	casper tavernello 文章总计: 5057	A "holy arrangement of extinguished fire"
		2007年十月 1日 03:59
	kafetzou 文章总计: 7963	I took your suggestion for the 2nd line, Casper, and I changed "nail him" to "nail him down". Is it OK now? CC: Freya
		2007年十月 1日 04:03
	Freya 文章总计: 1910	Yes. It's OK
		2007年十月 1日 05:26
	kafetzou 文章总计: 7963	Thank you; I've accepted it.