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عنوان
Sacro Império Composição sagrada em fogos...
متن
casper tavernello پیشنهاد شده توسط
زبان مبداء: پرتغالی برزیل

Sacro Império
Composição sagrada em fogos apagados
Experimentação
Mestre da hipnose congrega fantasmas
Anfíbios mergulhados em solo infértil
Transe de um corpo inerte

Todos os semelhantes se precipitam
Caos na exposição
Um único ser parado na parede
Gritos calados pelo alçapão

Preguem-no

Luzes os trazem de volta à escuridão
Ajoelham-se
Palavras repetidas se oferecem
O rei ainda não está satisfeito
Acolherão amanhã um novo eleito

Julguem-no
Alterando-nos
ملاحظاتی درباره ترجمه
precipitar-se = cair à frente.
<<Sacro Império>> is an allusion to the Holy Roman Empire

عنوان
Sacred Empire
ترجمه
انگلیسی

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زبان مقصد: انگلیسی

Holy Empire
Holy arrangement of extinguished fires
Experimentation
Master of hypnosis makes ghosts congregate
Amphibians buried in infertile ground
Ecstasy of an immobile body

All the similar ones hurry
Chaos in the exposition
A lone being standing on the wall
Silent screams for the snare

Nail him down

Lights bring them back to the darkness
They kneel down
Repeated words offer themselves up
The king still is not satisfied
Tomorrow they'll shelter a newly chosen one

Judge him
Changing us
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28 سپتامبر 2007 16:58

casper tavernello
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Holy Empire.

28 سپتامبر 2007 17:24

Porfyhr
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With respect for your language Casper, I felt that this was like a medieval text, and the expression "Holy Empire" should be translated as the "Holy See", equally to the process a.k.a. "the inquisition". What do you think about that?

29 سپتامبر 2007 05:41

kafetzou
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I've made a few edits. "Holy See" refers only to the Papacy, Porfyhr.

CC: Porfyhr

29 سپتامبر 2007 08:13

Freya
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some ideas:submerged-burried, inert-moveless, all the similar ones-all of a kind(?), "the king still isn't satisfied"(ainda means still, yet)

29 سپتامبر 2007 13:38

Dalmo
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There are quite a few words that aren't literally translated (i.e. ser=being)

29 سپتامبر 2007 14:57

kafetzou
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Thank you, everyone. Is it OK now? What does "composition" mean here?

CC: Dalmo Porfyhr Freya

29 سپتامبر 2007 15:23

Freya
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Yes. In my opinion the translation is good now.
"composition" is a metaphore which describes the empire.The empire is seen as a composition of people that have been blessed in extinguished fires. That's my guess, but I'm not sure.

29 سپتامبر 2007 15:36

kafetzou
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How about "confederation", then? A composition is most often a written essay in English.

CC: Freya

29 سپتامبر 2007 15:41

kafetzou
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Now that I'm re-reading it, the phrase "nail him" bothers me. What is it supposed to mean? As in "nail him to the cross", or what?

Also, what is "Silent screams for the snare"?

29 سپتامبر 2007 15:41

Freya
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If you agree with my way of translating the word" composition", I believe that "confederation" is a good choice but the others can have different opinions about "composition".We'd better wait for other ideas.

29 سپتامبر 2007 15:45

casper tavernello
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"Composição" is the way you arrange things so they get a special magic (often used on Eastern religions).

29 سپتامبر 2007 15:45

Freya
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"pregar" means "to clamp" or "to nail" and "preguem-no" = "clamp him "

29 سپتامبر 2007 15:56

casper tavernello
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Pregar could be "to nail" and "to preach".
I see that I forgot to explain a lot of things.

29 سپتامبر 2007 15:55

casper tavernello
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A "holy arrangement of extinguished fire"

1 اکتبر 2007 03:59

kafetzou
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I took your suggestion for the 2nd line, Casper, and I changed "nail him" to "nail him down". Is it OK now?

CC: Freya

1 اکتبر 2007 04:03

Freya
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Yes. It's OK

1 اکتبر 2007 05:26

kafetzou
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Thank you; I've accepted it.