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Traduction - Anglais-Espagnol - Harnessing advanced vision analysis technology to...Etat courant Traduction
Catégorie Site web / Blog / Forum | Harnessing advanced vision analysis technology to... | | Langue de départ: Anglais
We harness advanced vision analysis technology to prevent and mitigate vehicle collisions | Commentaires pour la traduction | For a website. This is a statement of purpose for a company that produces technology that alerts drivers of potential dangers on the road. It needs to sound natural and convincing in the target languages. |
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| Utilizar tecnologÃa de análisis de visión avanzada para... | | Langue d'arrivée: Espagnol
Nos valemos de la tecnologÃa de análisis de visión avanzada para evitar y atenuar las colisiones de vehÃculos. | Commentaires pour la traduction | Other option: Empleamos la tecnologÃa de análisis de visión avanzada para prevenir y mitigar colisiones de vehÃculos. |
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Dernière édition ou validation par lilian canale - 21 Juillet 2010 21:06
Derniers messages | | | | | 15 Juillet 2010 07:06 | | | Don't agree with "utilizamos", which means "to use". It's less strong than "we harness". | | | 15 Juillet 2010 10:00 | | | Hi,
I've changed the translation and suggested three other possibilities. The translation depends on the function you want to give to the sentence.
The first and the second, beginning with Aprovechamos and Empleamos, are possible meanings. But I would rather prefer the third one, beginning with destinamos, even though it seems less literal, because I think it keeps the meaning but it is very natural and has an advertising style.
The choice is yours or at least requires a discussion. The translator cannot decide completely. Good luck! | | | 21 Juillet 2010 18:30 | | | Hola muchachos, mi sugerencia:
"Sacamos provecho de la tecnologÃa de análisis de visión avanzada para evitar y atenuar las colisiones de vehÃculos." | | | 21 Juillet 2010 18:42 | | | I agree totally with lilian canale in "evitar" and "atenuar". But not specially in "sacamos provecho de": it doesn't sound like advertising. I don't think this is the best context to use these expression first because is too long and second because "Aprovechamos" and "sacamos provecho" can be a synonym, but "Aprovechamos" emphasizes the action and the goal, but "sacar provecho" has the connotation of using, of benefit or advantage, and focusing on the material or object. | | | 21 Juillet 2010 19:27 | | | También podrÃa ser: "Nos valemos de la tecnologÃa..." | | | 22 Juillet 2010 11:44 | | | De acuerdo, muy buena opción: "nos valemos". No se me habÃa ocurrido. Se nota que algunos teneis mucha experiencia |
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