You put an end to our love, poisoned the sun, shattered my heart and another one loved.
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toxied the sun doesn't make it in english. I assume you mean poisoned the sun since you translated the word as toxi(which I assume you ment to write as toxic). Lets try poisoned and see how the vote goes.
Laste validigita aŭ redaktita de dramati - 8 Decembro 2007 15:26