תרגום - סינית מופשטת-אנגלית - [摘要]第三产业不仅发展潜力大，而且对社会经济发展带动作用明显。本文从厦门市第三产业的结构现状及特点...

Hi Cacue,
What do you think of the following corrections?
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Tertiary industries not only have great potential for growth, but also clearly have a leading role in socioeconomic development as well. This paper begins with a description of the present framework and characteristics of the tertiary industries in Xiamen City, in light of its comparative advantages in the economic zone on the western side of the Taiwan Strait, in order to explore measures which could promote the accelerated development of Xiamen's tertiary industries.
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I'll wait for your answer before I change the translation!

Hi again Cacue,
Sorry, I noticed your "CC me" box was unchecked, so I have to CC you specifically...

CC: cacue23

Lol, thanks, it does sound better now.

Great! So to acceptance it goes!