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Translation - English-German - Hi my love

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Category Letter / Email - Love / Friendship

Title
Hi my love
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Submitted by Anjo_moreninha
Source language: English Translated by alekcahdra

"I don't want to be something new in your life and grow old at dawn. I just want to turn the corner of your world and leave you with the feeling that I was never gone."

Title
hallo meine liebe
Translation
German

Translated by Raziya
Target language: German

"Ich möchte nicht etwas neues in deinem Leben sein und schon bei Tagesanbruch altern. Ich möchte einfach die Winkel deiner Welt verdrehen und dir das Gefühl geben, dass ich nie weg war."
Last validated or edited by italo07 - 17 February 2009 17:05





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16 February 2009 19:57

italo07
Number of messages: 1474
Achte bitte auf die Groß- und Kleinschreibung, sowie auf grammatikalische Fehler (das "dass". Es fehlen auch noch die Anführungszeihen, so wie es in der Originalübersetzung ist.

16 February 2009 21:34

gbernsdorff
Number of messages: 240
The meaning is right but in my opinion *zu Beginn* doesn't do justice to the "poetic" quality of *amanhecer do dia*. I would suggest something like *beim Sonnenaufgang* or *beim Morgenrot* or *beim Tagesanbruch*.

17 February 2009 11:40

sagittarius
Number of messages: 118
Hi, Raziya,

In the original text the dawn was mentioned. You have translated it as "Beginn". Why?