نص أصلي - انجليزي - when I have seen by time's fell hand defaced

Hello Lein
Is this sentence ok?

CC: Lein

I have replaced 'i' by 'I'.
The rest is old English from a Shakespeare sonnet

Except the original reads 'when I have seen by time's fell hand defaced.

Hello nni_nni
are you sure you want 'been' and not 'seen' in your text?

sorry,a typo. please use "seen".Thanks a lot!

I've replaced "been" with "seen" nni_nni!
Lein, thanks a lot