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Translation - English-German - Mount Atlas

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Title	Mount Atlas
Text Submitted by CocoT	Source language: English Translated by Efylove [Mount Atlas] is entirely silent during the day and, isolated, it arouses horror; [at night] it is enlightened by nocturnal fires and it echoes everywhere with the choirs of Aegipans; you can hear the singing of flutes and the tinkle of cymbals along the seashore.
Remarks about the translation	Cap. XXIV, Caius Julius Solinus, "De Mirabilibus Mundi". He's talking about Mount Atlas. Literally: "it isn't isolated without horror"; "the singing of flutes and the tinkle of cymbals are heard". "Per oram maritimam" = you can hear the singing of these instruments even along the seashore.

Title	Berg Atlas
Translation German Translated by Rodrigues	Target language: German [Berg Atlas] ist tagsÃ¼ber vollkommen ruhig und isoliert, er ruft Horror hervor; [nachts] leuchtet er von nÃ¤chtlichen Feuern und es gibt Ã¼berall Echos mit den ChÃ¶ren der Aegipanen; Du kannst das FlÃ¶tenspiel hÃ¶ren und das Klingeln der Zimbeln entlang der MeereskÃ¼ste.
Remarks about the translation	edited the sentence to "...leuchtet er von nÃ¤chtlichen Feuern..." 10.01.10 19:40 R.

Validated by Francky5591

- 10 January 2010 22:50

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		8 January 2010 11:41
	gbernsdorff จำนวนข้อความ: 240	VorschlÃ¤ge: -lucet nocturnis ignibus -> nachts ist er von Feuern erhellt (oder erleuchtet) -AEgipanum -> der Aegipanen -hÃ¶ren statt hÃ¶eren
		8 January 2010 11:50
	Lein จำนวนข้อความ: 3389	- dem Chor der Aegipans -> should be plural (more than one choir) - hÃ¶eren -> hÃ¶ren
		8 January 2010 21:38
	merdogan จำนวนข้อความ: 3769	I agree.
		8 January 2010 22:47
	gbernsdorff จำนวนข้อความ: 240	So do I. -> mit den ChÃ¶ren der Aegipanen, oder -> mit den AegipanenchÃ¶ren
		9 January 2010 01:23
	Rodrigues จำนวนข้อความ: 1621	new poll after edits
		9 January 2010 21:53
	jollyo จำนวนข้อความ: 330	interpunction: one comma before the word 'isoliert' and one after perhaps even better 'abgesondert' es gibt -> gibt es das FlÃ¶tenspiel -> 'den Klang der FlÃ¶ten' or 'das Singen der FlÃ¶ten'
		10 January 2010 14:05
	gbernsdorff จำนวนข้อความ: 240	I think it is fine as it is now. It is a perfect translation of the English text. Jollyo's suggestion about adding a comma before 'isoliert' makes your translation follow more closely the Latin source text [Silet per diem universus, nec sine horrore secretus est], which also puts 'isoliert' in the same phrase as 'Horror', separating it from 'ruhig'.However, if you add that comma before 'isoliert', the word order of 'er ruft' must be inversed. Mark that I have suggested [8 Jan. 11.41] to ommit 'nÃ¤chtlichen', for a similar reason. The Latin text [lucet nocturnis ignibus] mentions 'nÃ¤chtlich/nocturnis' just once. Therefore, if you take Latin instead of English as your source text, it would be more appropiate to say 'er leuchtet mit nÃ¤chtlichen Feuern' or 'nachts ist er von Feuern erhellt'. It all depends on what you consider to be your source text.
		10 January 2010 19:49
	Rodrigues จำนวนข้อความ: 1621	edited now the thing with "nÃ¤chtlichen". Some admin for accepting available?
		10 January 2010 19:50
	Rodrigues จำนวนข้อความ: 1621	edited now the thing with "nÃ¤chtlichen". Some Admin for acceptance available?