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kuÅŸ kanadi gibi kirik Yar tennine haram deÄŸdi...
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Добавлено Marwita
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kuÅŸ kanadi gibi kirik
Yar tennine haram deÄŸdi
Zamansiz BU ayrilik
Yar tenine Haram deÄŸdi
Zamansiz BU ayrilik
Kalbimi gomdüm toprağa
Ihlamurlar can aÄŸladi

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linden
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Английский

Перевод сделан handyy
Язык, на который нужно перевести: Английский

Broken like a bird's wing
My love, your body has been tainted
THIS is an untimely separation
My love, your body has been tainted
THIS is an untimely separation
I buried my heart in the ground
The lindens grieved from their souls.
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---> "Ihlamurlar can aÄŸladi" -- This an figurative expression, it means "linden", which is a symbol of their love ...

(handyy)
Последнее изменение было внесено пользователем kafetzou - 2 Август 2008 01:37





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27 Июль 2008 19:14

lilian canale
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Hi handyy,

By "blotted" do you mean "dry" or "stained"?

and by "lindens", "basswood"? If so, I think I still prefer: "Lindens shed tears from the soul"

and "burried in the ground"

27 Июль 2008 19:32

handyy
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Hi,

--> blotted = stained
--> linden = basswood

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"Ihlamurlar can aÄŸladi", here it exactly says, "Lindens wept souls(rather than tears)", so I had some doubts while translating it.



28 Июль 2008 00:04

lilian canale
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OK, let's set a poll and see if someone comes up with any ideas.

29 Июль 2008 18:09

kfeto
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hello handyy, lilian

nice translation.
Instead of just 'blotted' maybe
"tarnished/soiled/stained/blotted with sin"?

30 Июль 2008 01:56

kafetzou
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My suggestions:

was blotted --> has been tainted
split --> separation

The tree is called "linden" in English - there's one right in front of my house, but I agree with Lilian that it sounds more poetic if we use a more literal translation: "The lindens grieved from their souls".

30 Июль 2008 15:34

Marwita
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Dear All,
I really want to thank you so much for your nice help
Thank you very much to having a time in order to translate me this Turkish Lyrics I do appreciate your help.
Marwa

2 Август 2008 00:01

handyy
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Sorry for being late

Thank you all for your help

2 Август 2008 01:35

kafetzou
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handyy, you didn't change "blotted". This is not correct.

CC: lilian canale

2 Август 2008 01:38

kafetzou
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I hope nobody minds, but I changed it.

CC: lilian canale

2 Август 2008 13:25

handyy
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no problem! but I just want to learn why "blotted" is not correct. I sincerely want to learn, doesn't "to blot" have the same meaning with "to taint" (--> to corrupt morally)??

2 Август 2008 17:34

kafetzou
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Nowadays, "to blot" usually means to soak up liquid, as in "I blotted the floor with a paper towel". I've never heard it with the same meaning as "to taint", but maybe in Britain or in an old-fashioned context. Also, the noun "blot" seems to have that moral meaning more often: "There's a blot on his character."

But "to taint" is much better here because it's totally unambiguous - every English speaker would understand that it means "morally stained".

2 Август 2008 22:58

handyy
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I got it Kafetzou. Thank you so much

3 Август 2008 00:46

kafetzou
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Also, I think separation is better than split for the same reason - less easily misunderstood.