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عنوان
kuÅŸ kanadi gibi kirik Yar tennine haram deÄŸdi...
متن
Marwita پیشنهاد شده توسط
زبان مبداء: ترکی

kuÅŸ kanadi gibi kirik
Yar tennine haram deÄŸdi
Zamansiz BU ayrilik
Yar tenine Haram deÄŸdi
Zamansiz BU ayrilik
Kalbimi gomdüm toprağa
Ihlamurlar can aÄŸladi

عنوان
linden
ترجمه
انگلیسی

handyy ترجمه شده توسط
زبان مقصد: انگلیسی

Broken like a bird's wing
My love, your body has been tainted
THIS is an untimely separation
My love, your body has been tainted
THIS is an untimely separation
I buried my heart in the ground
The lindens grieved from their souls.
ملاحظاتی درباره ترجمه
---> "Ihlamurlar can aÄŸladi" -- This an figurative expression, it means "linden", which is a symbol of their love ...

(handyy)
آخرین دارای اعتبار یا ویرایش شده توسط kafetzou - 2 آگوست 2008 01:37





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27 جولای 2008 19:14

lilian canale
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Hi handyy,

By "blotted" do you mean "dry" or "stained"?

and by "lindens", "basswood"? If so, I think I still prefer: "Lindens shed tears from the soul"

and "burried in the ground"

27 جولای 2008 19:32

handyy
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Hi,

--> blotted = stained
--> linden = basswood

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"Ihlamurlar can aÄŸladi", here it exactly says, "Lindens wept souls(rather than tears)", so I had some doubts while translating it.



28 جولای 2008 00:04

lilian canale
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OK, let's set a poll and see if someone comes up with any ideas.

29 جولای 2008 18:09

kfeto
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hello handyy, lilian

nice translation.
Instead of just 'blotted' maybe
"tarnished/soiled/stained/blotted with sin"?

30 جولای 2008 01:56

kafetzou
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My suggestions:

was blotted --> has been tainted
split --> separation

The tree is called "linden" in English - there's one right in front of my house, but I agree with Lilian that it sounds more poetic if we use a more literal translation: "The lindens grieved from their souls".

30 جولای 2008 15:34

Marwita
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Dear All,
I really want to thank you so much for your nice help
Thank you very much to having a time in order to translate me this Turkish Lyrics I do appreciate your help.
Marwa

2 آگوست 2008 00:01

handyy
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Sorry for being late

Thank you all for your help

2 آگوست 2008 01:35

kafetzou
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handyy, you didn't change "blotted". This is not correct.

CC: lilian canale

2 آگوست 2008 01:38

kafetzou
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I hope nobody minds, but I changed it.

CC: lilian canale

2 آگوست 2008 13:25

handyy
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no problem! but I just want to learn why "blotted" is not correct. I sincerely want to learn, doesn't "to blot" have the same meaning with "to taint" (--> to corrupt morally)??

2 آگوست 2008 17:34

kafetzou
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Nowadays, "to blot" usually means to soak up liquid, as in "I blotted the floor with a paper towel". I've never heard it with the same meaning as "to taint", but maybe in Britain or in an old-fashioned context. Also, the noun "blot" seems to have that moral meaning more often: "There's a blot on his character."

But "to taint" is much better here because it's totally unambiguous - every English speaker would understand that it means "morally stained".

2 آگوست 2008 22:58

handyy
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I got it Kafetzou. Thank you so much

3 آگوست 2008 00:46

kafetzou
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Also, I think separation is better than split for the same reason - less easily misunderstood.