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ya gözlerın aklımida ya akilım adında ya hayalın...
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ya gözlerın aklımida ya akilım adında ya hayalın karşımda ya şesin kulağımda ya ben cildiriyorum yada çok özluyorum ya özlemek çok güzel yada özlenen çok özel

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Your eyes are on my mind or my mind is in your name, or your image
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Vertaald door buketnur
Doel-taal: Engels

Either your eyes are on my mind or my mind is in your name, either your image is in front of me or your voice is in my ears. Either I am going insane or I long very much, either longing is very beautiful or the one who is longed for is very special.
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longing is "to miss" in original text.
Laatst goedgekeurd of bewerkt door kafetzou - 18 augustus 2008 03:21





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14 augustus 2008 06:35

kafetzou
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either ... or
in your name
go insane
good --> beautiful

16 augustus 2008 08:57

buketnur
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Thanks kafetzou,
I changed, it is better now

16 augustus 2008 15:46

kafetzou
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This is better, but it's not ready yet. You need to use "either ... or" every time you have "ya ... ya" in Turkish.

Also, "in my mind" --> "on my mind", and that part needs a verb.


16 augustus 2008 16:53

buketnur
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Thanks kafetzou,
I made the vice verse "Your eyes in my mind or my mind is on your name",sorry.


16 augustus 2008 17:01

kafetzou
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Much better, but you still have no verb in the first part: "Either your eyes are on my mind ..."

16 augustus 2008 17:02

buketnur
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Oh my God. I am really sorry, I make terrible mistakes.

16 augustus 2008 17:05

kafetzou
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No, no, no - they really weren't terrible on this one!

16 augustus 2008 17:10

kafetzou
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I'm sorry, buketnur - now that all of the little errors have been fixed, I see that we need to make a change to the last part. In Turkish, three forms of the same verb are used: özluyorum, özlemek, and özlenen, but in English you used "longing" for one of them, thus losing the sense of this section. Here is my suggestion:

ya ben cildiriyorum yada çok özluyorum ya özlemek çok güzel yada özlenen çok özel --> Either I'm going crazy, or I'm longing too much; either the longing is very beautiful or the object of the longing is very special

What do you think?

17 augustus 2008 15:03

buketnur
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Kafetzou burda türkçe konuşabilir miyim? Türkçe' de şimdiki zamanda söylenen bir çok şey İngilizce' de geniş zamanda söyleniyor. Mesela, "seni seviyorum" şimdiki zamanda, İngilizce'de " I love you" geniş zamanda. Bu nedenle " I miss too much" daha doğru görünüyor ve "the missed one" daha iyi değil mi?

17 augustus 2008 18:18

kafetzou
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But you can't use "miss" without an object in English.

17 augustus 2008 18:34

buketnur
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Ok Kafetzou, Thanks, I changed it, how is it now?

18 augustus 2008 03:20

kafetzou
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I guess it's OK, although these don't seem like logical "either ... or" type choices in English, but I guess maybe they don't in Turkish either.

18 augustus 2008 15:43

buketnur
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Yes you are right, Kafetzou.
It is strange in Turkish too.