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"panta rhei" isn't Latin, but transliteration of Antient Greek sentence ("everything flows"?)
Yes, I wanted to leave the tranliterated version.

Well, Ania, I wouldn't use unpersonal "it" here. The author of the poem ( ) is the unspecified subject ... So, you can use optionally "she" hehe...

riiight ... i didn't know that, i should have asked you first. I'll correct it in a second

This looks good to me
I'd just put "panta rhei" in quotation marks and remove that "to" before "stay"

That's great for me, but one line:"(She)Doesn’t remember" - can we remove "(she)"?

What about: "Wondering"?

where would you put "wondering"?

Instead of :"(She)Doesn’t remember"

sounds good to me Aneta, what do you think?

Why, don't translate it directly from Polish?

nie pamięta już =she hasn't remember yet

I thought you didn't want 'she' to be used

I didn't want only brackets

Oh, OK

Thank you, dear Lilly!
And let the nonsense stay* is also perfect here!

Oh, Lilly, I don't know if "still" is good here:
She still hasn't remembered

Literally this line means:
She hasn't remember anymore...

Aneta, I used 'still' because you had used 'yet' in your post (she hasn't remembered yet ), but if you say it should be "anymore" then the verb tense should also change.
"She doesn't remember anymore" or "She no longer remembers"

Wow! Of course. I sometimes don't know which tense is correct... Still learning...
Thank you, Lilly!