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6 Octombrie 2009 11:35 |
| | "panta rhei" isn't Latin, but transliteration of Antient Greek sentence ("everything flows"?) 
Yes, I wanted to leave the tranliterated version.
Well, Ania, I wouldn't use unpersonal "it" here. The author of the poem ( ) is the unspecified subject ...  So, you can use optionally "she" hehe... |
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6 Octombrie 2009 14:46 |
| | riiight ... i didn't know that, i should have asked you first. I'll correct it in a second |
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6 Octombrie 2009 17:12 |
| | This looks good to me 
I'd just put "panta rhei" in quotation marks and remove that "to" before "stay" |
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7 Octombrie 2009 11:59 |
| | That's great for me, but one line:"(She)Doesn’t remember" - can we remove "(she)"?
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7 Octombrie 2009 17:12 |
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7 Octombrie 2009 19:46 |
| | where would you put "wondering"? |
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7 Octombrie 2009 20:10 |
| | Instead of :"(She)Doesn’t remember" |
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7 Octombrie 2009 21:59 |
| | sounds good to me Aneta, what do you think? |
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8 Octombrie 2009 09:38 |
| | Why, don't translate it directly from Polish?
nie pamięta już = she hasn't remember yet
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8 Octombrie 2009 12:41 |
| | I thought you didn't want 'she' to be used  |
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8 Octombrie 2009 12:55 |
| | I didn't want only brackets |
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8 Octombrie 2009 13:07 |
| | Oh, OK |
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8 Octombrie 2009 13:16 |
| | Thank you, dear Lilly!
And let the nonsense stay* is also perfect here!
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8 Octombrie 2009 14:26 |
| | Oh, Lilly, I don't know if "still" is good here:
She still hasn't remembered
Literally this line means:
She hasn't remember anymore... |
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8 Octombrie 2009 16:13 |
| | Aneta, I used 'still' because you had used 'yet' in your post (she hasn't remembered yet ), but if you say it should be "anymore" then the verb tense should also change.
"She doesn't remember anymore" or "She no longer remembers" |
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8 Octombrie 2009 15:43 |
| | Wow! Of course. I sometimes don't know which tense is correct... Still learning...
Thank you, Lilly! |
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