Ver est iucundissimum tempus anni. Decorat novis variisque coloribus margines rivorum; fluminum et viarum, prata, agros, totam tellurem. Tempore veris arbores, arbusta, herbae florent, silvae frondent, tument in palmite gemmae.
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iucumdissimum(o mais jucundo), sub(sob), cincta(cingida), tam(tão). o texto deve ser traduzido em potuguês Br, pois há diferença em o potuguês de Portugal.
Spring is the most pleasant season of the year. It adorns with several new colours the banks of the creeks, rivers and ways, the meadows, the fields, the whole earth. By the spring time, the trees, the bushes and the herbs flourish, the forests leaf, the stems sprout out of the vines.
Dernière édition ou validation par goncin - 26 Juin 2008 12:02
Minor things:
in English it is more common to talk about 'spring' than about 'the spring'. 'The spring' in fact sounds very odd.
for anything watery, 'banks' is better than 'borders'.
because the words 'tree' and 'bush' are not similar (in contrast to 'arbores' and 'arbusta'), is it necessary to keep the word 'true'? It would sound more natural without.
After your comment, and reviewing the original text, I've finally found out what the word "veris" mean: it isn't "true", but "of spring" (it was also odd to me).