ترجمة - كرواتي-إيطاليّ - Tvoga oka sjaj svaku noc sam sanjao u tvoj topli...

Hi! Could I have a bridge for evaluation? I know the original text is in Croatian, but maybe Serbian Experts could read it without problems Thanks in advance anyway

CC: maki_sindja Cinderella

"I was dreaming every night the glow of your eye(s), I was always coming back in your warm hug"

I'm not sure about some phrases in English but I tried to translate it as better as I could. The word order in the original is a bit different from usual, it looks like a poetic style - like this:
"The glow of your eye(s) I was dreaming every night, in your warm hug I was always coming back"

nije gramatički točno - ai tuoi caldi abbracci continuo di ritornarmi...
možda j bolje koristiti splendore umjesto bagliore...

Glasala sam da bi se moglo promijeniti nesto jer ovo
"il tuo caldi abbraccii continuamente ritornano"treba biti "nell tuo caldo abbraccio continuamente tornavo"

netočan je drugi dio rečenice koja treba glasiti: nel tuo caldo abbraccio continuamente ritornavo

Thank you everybody